species extinction
As human beings are gradually aware of the relationship between our growing population and the environmental problems like global warming,melting glaciers and the like,few of us noticed the growing population also have enormous influence on the wildlife.As the line graph demonstrates above,in us,with the population increase the amount of extinct species soar as well.
More people needs more place to live in ,we have to translate more nature space into human’s colony.Consequently ,the wildlife have to forsake their homelands for a more save habit .Deforestation and the desire of animals’ fur also play an important role.Deforestation pushes the process of destroying the wildlife’s habitat,capturing animals for fur accelerates the rate of species extinction.With all this major elements work together, a host of species will never meet us.
To save the remaining species from wrong hands,we must prevent illegal transaction of animals and build more nature preserve.Meanwhile we need to advertise the importance of protecting the wildlife to earn more support.Only in this way can we have a more colorful beautiful and vigorous earth.
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