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The Cause of Aging Society
Why aging society became a serious issue in Japan? Japan has the largest population of people whose age is over 65 years old in the world. Elderly population is expected to increase. Aging society is progressing because of changing of awareness of marriage and extending the average life expectancy.
Way of thinking about marriage for young generations changed. First, the number of women who not getting married is going up in Japan. Woman do not need to financially help from man because they have more working opportunities than before. In 1965, only 2 % of population would not get married, but, now, 10% of population for woman would not get married (Bradly, Marceau, Hirata, 2018). Second, Late marriage is progressing in Japan. Young generations cannot afford to marry and provide for their family because they get low salary (fan, 2018), so they choose to stay single instead of working hard for their family. As a conclusion, marriage is no longer importance for young generations in Japan.
Well-ordered living environment caused extending the average lifespan in Japan. First, substantial medical administration system allowed to extend life expectancy. There are no financial worries to go to hospital because of national health insurance systems. Second, the balanced diet lead to live longer. Japanese-style meals consists food which containing an abundance nutrient (Petre, 2019). In addition, Japanese food is attached importance to using seasonal ingredients. These foods have rich nutrition. Thus, extending the average life expectancy is leaded by organized life circle.
Changing of values for marriage and organized living environment makes aging society serious. Decreasing the number of marriage couple and late marriage shows that the Japanese has less interested in marriage than before. Substantial medical administration and balanced diet allow to extent the average life expectancy. Values for marriage and well-ordered living environment are the key of progressing aging society.
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The Facts of Healthy Country Japan.
Where is the healthiest country? It is Spanish. It is not Japan. There are many health issues in Japan. These problems are hard to solve. People in Japan gets unhealthier than before because mental issues and lifestyle disease are increasing.
There are many people who suffer from mental issues in Japan. First, they feel strong stress by their work. Japan is the worst country at the paid vacation usage rate ranking (Gatayama, 2018). This is shows that Japanese spend much time for their work, and they cannot get enough time to rest and enjoy their enough time. Second, bullying is increasing even it is becoming one of the common social issue in Japan. The rate of bullying in school has been increasing for three years. (Kawano, 2018) In addition, there are many types of bullying, such as workplace bullying and cyber bullying which bullying by using internet. These bullying can cause mental issues, such as PTSD. Thus, people who suffer from mental issue is increasing in Japan.
The health problems that has never happened before appears because of lifestyle. First, obese people are increasing in Japan (Hooper, 2012). Once, common Japanese food style was balanced diet, such as rice, fish and miso soup, but, Japanese often eats western food now. Second, the time spending on exercising is decreasing in Japan. Children came to no longer play outside because video game and smart phone became popular. It is not only problem among children but also adult people. People use public transportation instead of walking or cycling because of transportation developed. Therefore, Japanese lifestyle has changed significantly.
An increase of mental issue and lifestyle disease prove Japanese gets more unhealthier than before. Stress and bad lifestyle lead people to unhealthy. Therefore, people can no longer say, “Japanese is healthy”.
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