Dear friend on italki I wish I could take a online lesson for the correction but I'm kind of in a hurry so would you help me out? plz give me some corrections and natural expression it would be really appreciated ---------------------------------------------------- My school makes a beautiful place in spring days. Especially, a little tree stands out the most. When it ends up making a full bloom, it has such a strong scent that a man far from the tree can notice it. Its beautiful color makes people stop their walk and watch it, so there’re always people around it. It is also famous for its long history. In front of the tree, there is a memorial stoen, so we can find a message showing who and where and when it’s from. ----------------------------------------------------- I especially want to ask two sentence are ok here 'When it ends up making a full bloom" 'We can find a message showing who and where and when it's from'

Hi there! Native tutors :) I would really appreciate it if you could give a correction! "I have had this longing for this song to be in an official album as a big fan of her work." Does this sound right to you guys?

Hello dear friends on italki I'd like you to look at my writing and give me some corrections and natural expressions. I'd really appreciate it. Most of the sonnet is love poem and I think Shakespeare is the top of the romantic guy. I was able to get the feeling how he sincerely loved his partner. He said that every beauty disappears in the end but, his lover will live forever beautifully as he wrote and remained her in his poem. Hundreds of years after, Shakespeare’s poem exists until now, and I can feel her beauty through his poem. Shakespeare was right.

Hey folk on italki! I have some questions :) Would you stop by here? Last week, I went to Seoul with my friend. He woke me up calling “Let’s go to the sea” and I just agreed while asleep and joined him. would you plz change 'change' to some other expression ? and am I right to use asleep here? Should I say half asleep or in my sleep?

'spontaneous trip ' Is this a real word that can be used? You know, being spontaneous to go to sleep. Would you plz another word for it? Thank you in advance.

Hello there! I've got some writing by myself. Would you plz check and give me some good expressions? --------------------------------------------------------------- I usually climb the mudeng mountain every Saturday with my friend. Becasue I want to enhance my physical strength and lose the weight. It's been going on for a month to climb mountain and I can climb mountain easier than last week. I feel more stronger than ever. I'm so happy because I got a good habit.

Hello, italki folks! I have a question for you native tutors! It would be really appreciated if you could give me a reply Joyce: You were here for the money! Lonnie: No! Joyce: The money! Admit it! You aren't here 'cause of Will. You never cared about him. You never did! Lonnie: Jesus, Joyce, it was his funeral today. Do we have to do this right now? Joyce: I can't believe I fell for this. Lonnie: I'm here to help, Joyce. Joyce: To help? Lonnie: We could use that money for good. Joyce: Oh, like maybe to pay off your debts? -we could use that money for good. here in this line, could use like need? or is it used as 'use' ex) I could use a cup of coffee. I have to use your computer. the last question is 'for good' would you plz explain this word with an example? Thank you in advance!

Hello folks! If you have time, would you please correct the writing and give some natural expression about the word I use? The last two weeks were very painful. Across two weeks, I pulled out three wisdom teeth. Before meeting the dentist, I had a strong belief that my teeth grew fine and I was a lucky guy. But somewhere along the way, weird anxiety came to my mind and made me go see a dentist. Expectedly, my wisdom teeth had some problems. They were got rotten and harming other next?close? teeth. So I should have to pull them out. Though the one tooth leaning against the bottom put both I and the doctor in trouble during surgery, I could clear the wisdom teeth successfully.

Hello there! It would be really appreciated if any native friend could fix and give a natural expression. Thank you in advance I did a lot of part-time jobs when I was in college. At that time, I thought that the more I experience, the more I become mature but now that I look back, I think It would have been better an opportunity, If I had focused on what I had to do or could do as a student for example, challenging overseas exchange students and backpacking trips