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请检查这本文词 Meggie Gan每周5夜卡住头发、穿上围裙以后去学校做清扫工的工作。十八岁的中国姑娘得擦地板、摆椅子、抛出垃圾、收拾厕所，不过工资只是四镑每小时。她工作得很热情、因为她知道，这是唯一的能付教育的方法。 她被提出剑桥大学的位置，但是训练和生活这两个方面的费用共计九千五百镑每个年。正因为如此她每工作天的晚上做清扫工的工作和休假时在餐厅做服务员的工作。 “有时候我累死了” 去英国不到十八次的梅根说了。“可是这是对每个想在大学读书的人很吃力的时间。我觉得，这令我变更有经验和智慧的人身。我还以赚钱和对妈妈寄钱自豪。“ 三年前她对一打院校发了信。”我六岁时候学起来英语“她写了。”我学英文科目的时候没遇到障碍呢，我能学习得像一般英国学生一样。我父亲因病去世，母亲的收入对付大学不够了。我把自己看成努力的学生，希望我能收到奖学金。“ 梅根的信给一个院校留下强烈的印象，所以她收到学习的位置。她用妈妈的储金买了一个一行的票飞到了英国了。 过几年梅根回母国，哪里她将有许多工作的建议。

请检查这些句子吧 1) 她不是喜欢弹钢琴，就是喜欢吹长笛。 2）他不是怕给她打电话，就是认为这用不着。 3）她看不上了那个学生考试的答案。 4）这个披萨再可口也没有了。 5）你确定大厅没有你的护照吗？再找一番吧。 6）你怎么一下子吃了这么多巧克力？怪不得你的肚子疼得很多。 7）明天考试的时候，你尽管用小炒吧，老师最可能全试刷手机。 8）这个东西的用途是什么来着？老师昨天说过很多遍，可是我又忘了。 9）你唱歌比他唱得并不差。

请检查这些句子吧 1）经过弟弟的推荐我到那个公园去玩儿，哪里很快乐。去那儿我不感觉可惜。 2）我还吃不惯这么辣菜。 3）她艺术体操有两下子。 4）他有不对劲儿，一般把功课温习再好不过了，可是今天考砸了。 5）这课棕榈别提多好看了。 6）这个记新生词的方法真见效得很。 7）那时候他遇到很多困难，可是学习下来（这是“继续”的意思吗?)，结果成了熟练的专家。 8）你要么正在去做作业，要么我把你的手机夺去一个星期。

奥林匹克运动会 公元前773年最初的奥林匹克运动会为了庆祝宙斯在希腊的奥林匹亚市举行了。奥林匹亚有好看的白楼、大型的体育场、几个运动员能从事体育运动的学校。四年一次希腊最著名的体育比赛-就是奥林匹克运动会举行了在奥林匹克。许许多多城市和农村的男人、老人和孩子都到奥林匹亚来。很多人是徒步来的。只有希腊的男人和孩子能参加比赛。每个希腊的城市到比赛派自己的运动员。奥林匹克圣火发光了五天，奥林匹克运动会延续了五天，希腊有节日。奥林匹克运动会团结了一切希腊城市，所以战争结束了，和平在国家到来了。每个城市的人等着奥林匹亚的新闻。在奥林匹亚的体育场很多人看着比赛，和现代的人比起来，那时候的人一样强烈地支持最喜欢的运动员。

Please, correct this text The nightingale and the rose This story begins from describing suffering of one young man, because will soon be a ball, and he want dancing with a girl, but she said, that if this boy wanted to dance with her, he had to bring her one red rose. His garden hasn’t red rose, only has white rose. And because of it he was very upset. One nightingale observed him, It seems to her, that this love is true, and she decided to help him at any cost. This nightingale was flying and looking for this flower, but there were only white roses. One bush could grow a red rose overnight, but it need blood of the nightingale. This nightingale decided sacrifice for true love. She thought, that she just a bird, and compared with love of two teenagers, her heart, her life is nothing. She read to die for their happiness. The heart of this bird was pierced by a nib of the bush, and she have died. In the morning this boy woke up and noticed a very beautiful and red rose under his window. He caught this flow and rush to that girl. But she said, that another man gifted an adornment to her, and she want dancing with him. This boy with malice throw out that rose on the road, and it was trampled by a horse. This fairy tale is very upset. Because the nightingale sacrifices her life, she was sure, that these teenagers want to be together forever, and she will die for a great deal. But, nobody need her sacrifice. Actually, even that boy didn’t love this girl. Because after her refuse he went to his room and began studying as if happened nothing. If his love was true, he didn’t want to do that. I think despite this fairy tale was written in 19 century, it is very topical in our days. People often don’t value the things, that they received by efforts and sufferings of another people. This short story teach us don’t spread oneself for people, that don’t value us, and be more kind to another people, value what they do for us.