Can you make my expression more natural? There are more people concerned about the status of women in society, this reflects the progress of society to a certain extent. Women are supposed to have more opportunities and power to participate in more diverse social fields. In western countries, people's pursuit of gender equality is more open and free. Many successful women are willing to stand up and speak out for women's power and status. These women may be a female politician, or a very popular singer, they use their influence to help women gain more attention and resources. But it is undeniable that the words of society are still in the hands of men. In Asian countries, I don't think the discussion of women's status is as deep as the West. Asian culture is conservative and has relatively weak status for women. However, I think it’s very special in China, female status can be divided into family status and social status here. Generally speaking, women ’s family status is higher than their social status. In the Chinese family, Women have more discretion, even if the social status of men is much higher than that of women. If you are not married at 28 years old, you will be regarded as a FAILED girl, but no one cares if your career is successful. So when I decided to study in Japan this year, I was opposed by everyone around me. The only reason is that I am a 27 years old unmarried girl, I should not put time and energy on my dreams. Obviously this concept is outdated, every girl has the power to decide her own future instead of putting hope on others. I believe there will be more successful women in the future, proving that women also have many possibilities. What is the status of women in your country? Can you tell me your story?

female status(can you help me to correct the essay and tell me your story？) There are more people concerned about the status of women in society, this reflects the progress of society to a certain extent. Women are supposed to have more opportunities and power to participate in more diverse social fields. In western countries, people's pursuit of gender equality is more open and free. Many successful women are willing to stand up and speak out for women's power and status. These women may be a female politician, or a very popular singer, they use their influence to help women gain more attention and resources. But it is undeniable that the words of society are still in the hands of men. In Asian countries, I don't think the discussion of women's status is as deep as the West. Asian culture is conservative and has relatively weak status for women. However, I think it’s very special in China, female status can be divided into family status and social status here. Generally speaking, women ’s family status is higher than their social status. In the Chinese family, Women have more discretion, even if the social status of men is much higher than that of women. If you are not married at 28 years old, you will be regarded as a FAILED girl, but no one cares if your career is successful. So when I decided to study in Japan this year, I was opposed by everyone around me. The only reason is that I am a 27 years old unmarried girl, I should not put time and energy on my dreams. Obviously this concept is outdated, every girl has the power to decide her own future instead of putting hope on others. I believe there will be more successful women in the future, proving that women also have many possibilities. What is the status of women in your country? Can you tell me your story?

can you help me to correct this eassy？ There were a lot of shocking news about depression last year. Many celebrities have committed suicide because of depression. It contained Korean female star Shirley. Depression is a neglected mental illness, its severity is often underestimated. According to reports, more than one hundred million people in China suffer from different degrees of depression. What an amazing number! Unfortunately, less than 10 percent of people with depression are diagnosed and treated effectively in China. I don’t know what this number is in other countries.I think behind this reflects certain social problems. Chinese young people are under great pressure. Stress comes from their job, finance ,marriage and so on. Everyone tries their best to survive.They live in a tense atmosphere even have no time to settle down and read a book or listen to a song. China is still a developing country which made a great progress economically, it still have a lot of work to do. China was an imperial state until the end of Qing dynasty, ancient Chinese traditional thought and culture had a great influence on modern China. China needs time to change some of its old concepts and establish and improve a new social system. Whatever,I believe everything will go in a good direction.

I bought a broken computer(can you help me to correct my essay?) Yesterday I bought a new Lenovo computer in our local store,it cost me 4600RMB.When I went home,I turned on my computer and found the screen was flashing.After I shut down and restarted,the situation became more serious.I realized I bought a defective product.I was frustrated and immediately contacted the store manager to explain the situation.Fortunately the manager agreed to give me a new one and apologized.So today I went to the store again and returned the broken computer.I was a little worried and asked manager:"Did I get a good one this time？"Manager replied:"Of course,the failure rate of computer is 1/1000, if you get a broken one again,you should buy a lottery ticket."Definitely I don't want that kind of LUCKY! I think this is a serious issue,it could be happen to any of us.I was lucky enough to solve the problem well in the end.My friend bought another brand computer last year which is a very famous international brand,three days later,however,serious problems arose.But the company couldn't promise her a new one,the only solution is to replace the hard drive for her.This is the same as replacing the engine after buying a new car.Sometimes electronic product companies pass on their failure rate losses to consumers. it's unfair.This is the overlord clause.

Can you help me to correct my essay? I would like to share you a book recetly I read.The book name's Just Kids.It was written by a famous American singer,Patti Smith.Also she is a morden poet.Another honor,she is the godmother of punk,punk is a type of music.She ever had an excellent performence on Nobel ceremony on behalf of Bob Daylon.That's a classic show.In this book,she talked about a lot of things all of her lifetime.It contained her music,her lover,her friends and some others special experience she ever met.It was fantastic and It impressed me.

Can you help me to correct this article written by myself? Do you recognize yourself?This may sound like a stupid question,but the truth is not that everyone has a clear understanding about themselves.     I used to be confused about something happens to me when I growing up.It was not until a few years later that the truth of some things became clear,and at that time it was not apparent.Now I understand this is a process of self-discovery.     Each person is special and gifted with unique talents,or have some FLAWS that no one else has.We don't need to feel self-abased and ashamed.Don't hide yourself in regret.cause we were BORN THIS WAY.Just love yourself and you're set.

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