请问这样翻译成中文可以吗 “わたしは每日早く帰りたいですが、たまには遲くまで殘業しなければなりません”翻译成“我想每天早点回去，但有时必须加班很晚才能回家”可以吗？

I am now in Vietnam I am now in Vietnam because of my major.My major is International Economic and Trade,which face to the Southeast Asia.So I have to study Vietnamese for my second language.I have studyed Vietnamese about 2 years,but I can not understand what the local people saying ,the same to the local people.I love Japanese as well, but now I should study by myself since last year.I want to know some Japanese here ,though my Japanese is poor

越南のメモ 每朝は6時半に起きです，そして，7時に學校へ行きます。途中パンを食べます。今日の天気はとても熱いです。宿舍から教室までだいたい步いて30分かかります，大奕ですね授業は11時ころ終ります。食堂で昼ご飯を食べですが，おいしいですよ。

Tôi ờ Sai Gon Việt Nam Vảo tháng 9,tôi dén Sai Gon rồi! Tuy tôi đã học tiếng Việt 2 nam,nhưng tiếng Việt của tôi không tốt lắm! mõi ngày tôi đi mua đó tôi không biết các bạn ấy nói gì.

今日 の メモ 今日は お父さんとバドミントンに行って、汗いっぱい出ちゃった、気持ちいいなあ～.最近 私 はどこへ 行きません、家で 日本語を勉強して。漫畫ゃ歌なとが 大好きですから、每日 見ますよ!

My writing I am appreciated that ancient culture all of the countries over the world,they are not only mysterious but the important point is I thought they are showing all kinds of soul they have! No matter how the conflict between different countries ,we must have fair jugement about that!

學校の10週年 誕生日 今日 は 私の大學の 10週年 誕生日です！今朝 7時半に 起きました。今日の天気 は よかったですよ ，でも， あまり 暑かったです！そして，仲間と 一緒に 先生の演說を 聞きました，樂しかったですね！別の學校 の觀光客は 多いですよ！今日の學校 は綺麗です！今晚の宴會は とても美しかったですね！

私 の 一天 今朝 わたしは 11時11分に 起きました，学校に遅刻する。

I want to improve my spoken english and pronunciation! I need someone who from English-speaking country also can say a little Chinese .Because no one say English around me! For a language learner,the most important is that someone can speak to! I dont know if i can reach a level to communicate with foreigners. Can someone help me to solve this problem? Thank you very much!