Alicia
Describe your dream house. My dream house is a cottage not far from the sea. In the ground-floor, it's four rooms. The first room, is my living-room, with a white sofa, a black armchair and a cofee table. A lot of paints, a lot of bibelots,.. There is a lamp, a french windows with a view of the garden, a television set and a phone. There is in my dream house a fully-equiped kitchen, with a fridge, and a door to the garden. There is in bath-room with a shower and a toilet. And there is a study-room with a desk and my computeur. In the first floor, there is three bed-rooms and a toilet. In my bed-room, there is a wardrobe, a bed of course, a bedside table a lot of picture of me and a television set. There is a balcony with a view of the sea. My house is really beautiful and spacious. It's big and expensive, but in my dream, I am rich. In the garden, there is a lot of trees with fruits. The is a patio in front of the house, and there is a drive and a gate. The walls of my house are white, beacause is pure, is fresh, and I love it. And the all windows of my dream house have blind.
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     My dream house is a cottage not far from the sea. In <em>On </em>the ground floor it's <em>there are </em>four rooms.. The first room is my <em>There is a </em>livingroom with a white sofa, a black armchair and a cofee table. <em>My livingroom has a lot </em>A lot of paints <em>artwork and curios. </em>, a lot of bibelots,.. ornament There is a lamp, a<em>nd</em> french windows with a view of the garden; a television set and a <em>tele</em>phone. There is in <em>M</em>y dream house <em>has </em>a fully-equiped kitchen with a <em>re</em>fridge<em>rator</em> and a door <em>out </em>to the garden. There is in <em>a </em>bathroom with a shower and a toilet. And there is <em>Finally, there is </em>a study-room with a desk and my computeur <em>computer</em>.
     In <em>On </em>the first floor there is <em>are </em>three bedrooms and a toilet <em>bath</em>. In my bedroom, there is a wardrobe, a bed of course; <em>with </em>a bedside table. <em>There are</em> a lot of pictures of me, and a television set. There is a balcony with a view of the sea.
     My house is really beautiful and spacious. It's big and expensive, but in my dream I am rich.
     In the garden there is <em>are </em>a lot of <em>fruit </em>trees. with fruits. The is a patio in front of the house and there is a drive<em>way</em> and <em>with </em>a gate.
     The walls of my house are <em>pure </em>white, beacause is pure, is <em>because white walls look fresh and clean </em>fresh and I love it <em>that look</em>. And <em>All of </em>the all windows of <em>in </em>my dream house have blind<em>s</em>.  
     <em>Alicia,
Your dream house sounds beautiful. I like that it is near the sea and that it has a garden. Remember that in English we do not hyphenate the words Livingroom, Bedroom, Study. Good job! </em>

<em>--Dan</em>

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Describe your dream house.

My dream house is a cottage not far from the sea. On the ground-floor, there are four rooms. The first room is my livingroom, which has a white sofa, a black armchair and a cofee table. There are lots of paintings and trinkets as well. There is also a lamp, French windows with a view of the garden, a television set and a phone in the livingroom. My dream house has a fully-equiped kitchen, including a fridge and a door to the garden. There is a bathroom with a shower and toilet. There is also a study room where I keep my desk and computer. On the first floor, there are three bedrooms and a bathroom. In my bedroom, there is a wardrobe; a bed, of course; a bedside table; many pictures of me; and a television set. There is a balcony with a view of the sea. My house is really beautiful and spacious. It's big and expensive, but in my dream, I am rich. In the garden, there are a lot of fruit trees. There is a patio in front of the house from which I can see the driveway and front gate. The walls of the house are white, which I chose because it is pure and fresh, and I love it. And all of the windows have blinds.

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Describe your dream house.

 

My dream house is a cottage, not far from the sea. On the ground-floor, it's are four rooms. The first room, One is my the living-room, with a white sofa, a black armchair and a cofee table. A lot of Plenty of paintings, a lot of and bibelots to match... There is A lamp, a french windows with a view ofto the garden, a television set and a phone too.


There is in My dream house will have a fully-equipped kitchen with a fridge [understood from your words, "fully equipped"] and a door to the garden. The bathroom will have everything a girl ever wanted. There is in bath-room with a shower and a toilet. [This sounds so mundane and blah.  My suggestion is whimsical and refreshing] And there Then too, is a study-room complete with a desk and my computeur. On the first upper ["first floor", in some countries can mean the "ground floor".  This way, there is no confusion] floor, there is will three bed-rooms and a toilet bedrooms and a full sized bathroom. In my bedroom bed-room, there is a wardrobe, a bed, of course, a bedside night table a lot of picture of me on which are plenty of photos of myself and a television set. There will be also is a balcony with a the view of the sea. My dream house is really will be very beautiful and spacious. It's big will be huge and expensive! but Doesn't matter, for in my dream, I am rich.


In the garden, there is a lot of will be many trees laden with fruits. [or simply, "many fruit trees"] The is a patio in front of the house, and there is a driveway and a gate. The walls of my house are white. beacause is pure, is fresh, and I love freshness and purity it. And the Finally, all the windows of my dream house have will have blinds[In using blinds, you are giving us an impression that your house will have a modern and clean look.  If you use "curtains", a more traditional image will appear in our minds]

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