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Camilo Diaz
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When I was a kid , I used a VHS, this was great for recording movies and tv shows that you wanted to rewatch. But sometimes the VHS would break and you couldn't use it anymore.
5 de fev de 2021 00:57
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When I was a kid , I used a VHS. It was great for recording movies and TV shows that you wanted to rewatch, but sometimes the VHS would break and you couldn't use it anymore.
Nice work! Although you can technically start a sentence with "but", you should probably do so only for dramatic effect. It's more common to either use "but" as a conjunction. Another option: "However, sometimes the VHS would break and you couldn't use it anymore."
5 de fevereiro de 2021
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22 de março de 2021
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