I think this text was pretty good :). The three main things I would correct are: - Names aren't written between brackets - they are written between commas. - Try not to repeat words a lot (in this example, 'movie', because it sound less natural. - Changed other things. Here's how I would do it: I think my favourite line would be "Aree O Sambha, kitne aadmi the" from the movie 'Sholay'. The line was said by Amjad Khan, who played the character Kabbar in the movie . His acting was remarkable. The movie was released in 1975, but its dialogues are still popular because all of them are intriguing. I have watched the movie several times. It has drama, emotion and comedy. Keep up the good work!