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The first thing I want to say is that my English is quite bad so I might make some mistakes in my writing, please check and fix them. Thank you! In my country, there's a time called 'Summer holiday' which occurs from June to September. In this time, all students don't have to go to school anymore. They will have a long holiday to travel every places they want and so do I. I often go on vacation with my family on the summer holiday. We usually travel by coach because it's cheaper than other kind of transportations. However, I prefer go by plane than the others one because of these reasons. First of all, I have car sickness so I feel very tired when I have to travel by coach for a long time. Further more, travelling by plane is faster and more comfortable for the passengers. Finally, we can also eat meal whenever we want because dishes are always available on the plane. In short, plane is my favorite transportation for travelling. So tell me about your travel story. Thanks for reading!
30 de jul de 2022 13:50
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The first thing I want to say is that my English is quite bad so I might make some mistakes in my writing, please check and fix them. Thank you! In my country, there's a time called 'Summer holiday' which occurs from June to September. during this time, students don't have to go to school. They have a long holiday to travel wherever they want and so do I. I often go on vacation with my family during the summer holiday. We usually travel by coach because it's cheaper than other kinds of transportation. However, I prefer going by plane because of these reasons. First of all, I suffer from car sickness so I feel very tired when I have to travel by coach for a long time. Furthermore, traveling by plane is faster and more comfortable for the passengers. Finally, we can also eat meals whenever we want because dishes are always available on the plane. In short, the plane is my favorite transportation for traveling. So tell me about your travel story. Thanks for reading!
Awesome job with this post! and there were not that many mistakes so you shouldn't feel bad about your English at all! i agree with your opinion on planes, since i also suffer from car sickness, however plane tickets can be expensive and the process of getting on a plane can be quite long.
31 de julho de 2022
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