Today

Yesterday I made the decision to start studying hard since my exams are coming up soon.
Today I started with a subject called Theory Of Probability. It is a really easy subject to understand, but it is hard to use, which was clear from  its problems.
However, I'm really happy that I started to study because I was worried and I was putting it off.

*Overall this was a very well written journal entry! You may need to work on your tenses for some verbs, but otherwise it was completely legible and i understood what you were saying. I'm glad as well that I've started to study for exams.

International English

Today at my school I studied (about the) International English. Some studie(r)s say that not all the people(s) (not) are american or british and that there are people who speak English outside of this group. These people are of International English. I think that I'm part of this group.

** Things highlighted were added in. Things in (Parenthesis) should be removed.

And, yes, there are people that speak English who are not from America or Britain, such as Australia, Canada, Scotland, and multiple other countries where English is learned as a second language quite well.

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I heard about a bad news from one of my friends. She said there aways have kids were robbed when grandpa take their grand kids out to a public park in her hometown, China. government and police take effective measures to avoid happening again and again. Do u think it is possible to reduce the rate of robbing children.

Corrections:

I heard bad news from one of my friends. She said their kids were robbed when their grandfather took them out to a public park in her hometown, China. Government and police are taking effective measures to avoid this happening again. Do u think it is possible to reduce the rate of crimes involving children?

Technically either would work, but I think the more commonly used one would be "on the startup screen". Although examples of other scenarios are possible 1. Please take a look at the startup screen for me. 2. There are multiple errors showing on the startup screen. 3. Within the startup screen alone there are a plethora of lines of code running in the background.

I will have a blind date later~~

My mom set me up on a blind date today. Apparently the fact that I am still not married really worried her, and one of her friend's friends's sister's son is a bachelor and available recently, so bingo, she arranged a date for me~~~ what a lovely mom~~ (▔▽▔)
I don't know about you guys, but for me I am a little bit ashamed of being single when I have to face my family. I mean, I'm OK with that, but my mom talks about how cute her friend's grandchildren are all the time, and to be honest she is already the coolest mom ever who has an unmarried daughter my age. My aunts started to worry about me like 4 years ago. I got myself too far, anyway, I decided OK, why not~~I have never been on a blind date before, but maybe I will meet my Mr. Right and live happily together forever like in fairy tales.（☆_☆） Or...just wake up from a day dream.
The only thing that is unfair is that my lovely mom only remembered(Make sure to put words in the past tense) to give her friends my picture and never got the boy's picture for me~~and I quote her "think about it as a birthday surprise party, it will be fun. "╬▔皿▔ Jesus, I never get an appropriate birthday surprise from her, ever~~~
Wish me good luck today~~



I highlighted major changes, other minor ones were simply spelling or subject/verb agreement that I just corrected within the text. Good luck on your blind date! Have fun!

Could anybody check my motivation letter? I will be grateful :) I am writing to apply for voluntary work as an EVS volunteer. I am very much determined to participate in this voluntary work because it gives me the possibility to help other people, while also helping me to gain many important skills. This past year I finished my education. I have a master's degree in economics. During my studies I was working in the accounting department of some polish company. Since 2013 I have been a volunteer for the city of Gdańsk. I help in the organization of various events and am involved in social assistance. I am open and forgiving and this helps while I am participating in non-governmental organizations. I am hard-working and capable of multi-tasking, so I can combine studies with work. As a result, I am able to gain experience and acquire new skills while also practicing the use of the knowledge I gained in college. Additional Details: I think that participation in voluntary work can become for me the next level of my education. Through it I could see how people live in another country, gather knowledge about other cultures and learn to integrate and cooperate with other people. This experience can open new opportunities in my life. I believe I would be an ideal candidate for this voluntary work. I am an open, fair-minded person and determined to further develop myself. I would be happy to supply you with further details if you have any questions. Hope this helps! wasn't able to do much editing since there was no "correction" option but good luck on your application!

My Friend Lucy

I'm a very shy girl and not very good at making friends. It usually takes me some time to become familiar with a friend and really open up (Either say "open up" or put the word "be" in front of open. "Open up" is the more common English expression though) to him/her. I have a really good friend that I can normally talk about anything with. Just now, we talked about our choices or our thought about our future careers. We also talked something about the differences of being a girl and a boy in today's China, and what the difference back in the 80's and 70's or in the Tang dynasty or even further a long time ago were. It's really nice to have a friend with whom I can talk about so much with.