Could you help me correct the following paragraph?🤗 This afternoon, I [started] worked /studied in the school library [for study]. [I'm] I have been preparing for my English test for a long time by doing exercises and memorising words. The test is around the corner,but I don’t think I'm ready for it. After correcting my simple examination paper this afternoon, I found that I had made a lot of mistakes, so feelings of disappointment [upset] and [anxious] anxiety overwhelmed me. /I was overwhelmed by disappointment and anxiety. The red marks reminded me that the chance of passing the exam is slim and the effort I have put into it [will be] is in vain. Is [enough] effort [equal to] [satisfied] reflected in results? I'm in a confused state of mind, but there is nothing to do but to keep on fighting! Maybe I can make it.

Could you help me correct the following paragraph?🤗 This afternoon, I went to the school library to study. I have been preparing for my English test for a long time by doing exercises and memorising words. The test is around the corner, but I think I'm not ready for it. After correcting my simple examination paper which I finished this afternoon, I found I made a lot of mistakes, this made me feel upset and anxious. The red marks remind me that the chance of passing the exam is slim and the efforts I have made will be in vain. Does making the effort mean I can expect satisfied results? I'm in a confused state of mind, but there is nothing to do but to keep on fighting! Maybe I can make it.