Angela
Today I started to read a book “Charlie and the chocolate factory” It is interesting story about a boy Charlie. I little bit read so I tell you what I read Charlie lives with his parents and their grandparents. They live in a small house with two rooms. In one room grandparents live and sleep in one bed. In other room Charlie live with his parents . They sleep on the mattress. Only one Charlie’s father works. He earns a little money that doesn’t enough for this count person. They eat the same meal every day. It is cabbage soup and bread with margarine. And only in once a year they buy one chocolate for Charlie. It usually happen in Charlie’s birthday. Charlie really loves chocolate. He eats it by little bites
12 Oca 2023 14:21
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Today, I started to read the book “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”. It's an interesting story about a poor boy's adventures. I have only read a little of it, so I can only tell you about what I've read so far. Charlie lives with his parents and grandparents in a small house with two rooms. The grandparents live and sleep in one room, and Charlie and his parents in the other. Their family shares mattresses because they are too poor for separate beds. Charlie’s father is the only one that works. He earns only a little money and this is not enough for even one person. They eat the same meal every day of cabbage soup and bread with butter. Once a year they are able to buy a chocolate bar for Charlie, usually on his birthday. Charlie loves chocolate so much that he eats it in little bites.
Or "I read the book called...." "named" is not appropriate here. Did they really say Margarine and not butter?
12 Ocak 2023
Today, I started to read a book named “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”. It is interesting story about a boy named Charlie. I read a little bit so I will tell you what I read Charlie lives with his parents and their grandparents. They live in a small house with two rooms. The grandparents live in one room and sleep on one bed. In the other room, Charlie lives with his parents and they sleep on the mattress. Charlie’s father is the only one who works. He earns a little money that doesn’t enough for this count person.* They eat the same meal every day, which is cabbage soup and bread with margarine. And only once a year, they buy a chocolate bar for Charlie. It usually happen on Charlie’s birthday. Charlie really loves chocolate; he eats it in little bites.
*I'm not sure what you are trying to say with this sentence.
12 Ocak 2023
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