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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
-Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
=> Human societies can be studied from diverse points of view; they are a matter of research for archaeologists, sociologists and politicians, among others. In very general terms, a society may be regarded as a voluntarily organized association of people with a common economic system, social structure, territory or purpose. Therefore, societies may range from the American Society of Physics (with a common purpose) to a whole nation (sharing territory and a socio-political system) or even the whole humanity.
It is clear that within this spectrum of possibilities, the statement refers to those societies that occupy a considerable extension in territory. In this way, how deep can we know such a group of people by studying only its foremost cities? That possibility depends on one particular factor: how polarized is such a society.
Consider as an example Colombia. As every third-world country, Colombia posses high indices of poorness, but also, a critical situation of violence since the 1960's, which some consider a civil war and others regard as terrorism.
In opposition to the common beliefs of the first-world, nowadays the main cities of Colombia are considerably safe, while the regions suffering the consequences of this conflict lie in located small towns.
In contrast, consider Brazil. Even though Brazil also presents severe problems of violence, this feature has different origins and distribution in its territory. The inequalities among different sectors of this society can be observed within a single city, with rich neighborhoods lying right next to the favelas.
Both countries are shaped culturally, politically and economically by the hardships of violence and poverty, however, if you decide to analyze them by their main cities, you can notice those fundamental features easier on one than in the other.
In that sense, a knowledge of any random society, totally unknown beforehand, can be developed in the statement's proposed way only with informal intentions. The seek of knowledge with academic purposes requires the consideration of the complexity of its structure and hence, the marginal groups of it.
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"Two heads are better than one", TOEFL practice, writing section.
Do you agree or disagree with the expression "Two heads are better than one"?
Answer:
Even though working with a partner could bring difficulties due to incompatibility of characters or deep differences in people's opinions, I have to say that I definitely agree with the expression "Two heads are better than one", because my experience has thought me that this is a very rare situation which committed workers can easily overcome.
There are several reasons why two people can perform far better than a single person in any kind of job, as this is usually the case. The first reason is that two people have never the same strengths and weaknesses, as this was the case of my friend Jota and me; while solving a physics problem, we realized that I was very good at identifying the physical principles governing the system and he was better at performing complex calculations. From that moment on, we were able to distribute tasks effectively and we got the best grade in the class, including three top students who decided to work alone.
This way, you don't only learn how to contribute to a group: you also discover your weak points and can work on them to be better at that job. That was what I did after discovering that my partner was better with certain calculations: the next semester I took an additional course in complex integration. That was a very good choice, I felt very good with myself after overcoming that weakness.
Another reason for working with another person is that this way you can meet new people. In my five years of career, about half of the friends I've made, at the beginning, were just partners of mine in a laboratory, presentation or problem session.
A final reason is that, as well as with skills, two partners always have different background. A different background will always mean a different way of thinking, different ideas and different ways of approaching a problem. You can do better with a partner, because as a group you bring more solutions than you would do by yourself.
Working with a partner is always better than working alone because it is more effective, you can learn from your partner a new way to do things and you can also learn about your strong and weak points, and when you know your partner, you have a stronger organization and methodology.
(some of the examples are not true, but that doesn't matter at the TOEFL test)
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Home schooling, integrated taks. TOEFL practice, writing section.
What does the professor thinks about the text?
Answer:
The author of the passage presents several points why home schooling may be a very good option today for parents in The United States, while the professor points out reasons for which the information presented in that reading may be incomplete.
The passage states that studies have demonstrated that children schooled at home perform better on standardized tests than regular students. However, the professor considers that there are many other factors that can explain better those results than can only do the fact that they are home-schooled children: First, parents teaching their kids at home are very motivated and according to the professor, students with motivated parents perform better regardless of their educational system (regular schooling or home schooling). Second, those kinds of tests generally evaluate the children's performance in math and language, therefore; it is an incomplete evaluation because children of regular schools may be better at other disciplines, like science and third, the home-schooling kids watch less TV than other kids do.
The author of the reading says that home-school students take part of several activities outside class. On the other hand, the professor considers that it doesn't mean that their interaction with people is normal, because it has been seen that home-schooled children relate better with adults than with kids of their same age. The professor also points out that children in schools can meet a lot of people, including their own teachers, from a broader range of ethnical and economical backgrounds in a daily basis.
In conclusion, the professor considers that home schooling can be a good option for certain cases, but that the information provided doesn't show the reality.
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Why should you learn Spanish?, TOEFL PRACTICE, writing section #3
I think that learning Spanish is a great idea for any kind of person. In general, learning a new language is a fun experience with lots of rewards and in particular, I consider Spanish is one of the best choices.
First of all, by learning a language you develop the same side of the brain which is related to creativity. Consider that the brain is a muscle that needs exercise. Most of us are used to perform repetitive work, so learning a language can help you indirectly to perform better, in a creative way, at work.
A second reason is that learning a language is fun. I'm not lying when I say that learning languages is my favorite hobby; it is easy and very enjoyable. It was a cold afternoon just after a hard day of work, I was sitting in front of my computer with a lot of homework to complete, when I realized that all the procrastination I was doing was actually helping me to improve my foreign languages. It is true, everything you do to relax during breaks, like reading jokes, chatting, watching videos, listening to music, etc. actually helps you to hear, write, read and speak better. Therefore, all you have to do is to procrastinate in another language, as I do.
Even if you are the kind of person who loves working so much that never procrastinates, I have some great news for you: you can do similar tasks to those you do at work by learning a language; you can register for Spanish classes at an institute, which will also speed up your learning process. There you will have daily homework, partners, competition, etc. Spanish will develop your memory, because the conjugation of verbs doesn't follow specific rules, but on the other hand it will be very easy for you to speak, because there is a specific relation between the way you write words and the way you pronounce them.
Another good reason for learning a language is all the rewards it brings. By the late stages of your process, you will be able to communicate your ideas to native speakers, write texts and read amazing books in Spanish. The possibility of sharing ideas with other cultures is an opportunity to enrich your knowledge about the world. Furthermore, considering that Spanish is one of the most popular languages today, such amount of people means lots of opportunities; new friends, a new market for your company, exchanging programs, etc.
There are lots of good reasons for learning Spanish, but in conclusion, it will improve several of your skills, it will open many doors for you and the
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Eco-tourism, TOEFL PRACTICE, integrated writting task #3
Generally speaking, the professor says that the positive points about green tourism stated in the reading are true, but they don't tell the whole story. She says that every development has good characteristics as well as drawbacks.
For her, it is true that green tourism, also called eco-tourism, has a small impact in the environment when compared to other developments, but the impact it has is not negligible at all; it requires the construction of several buildings and roads to access them. This process generates pollution and can hardly hurt delicate environments.
The author of the reading assumes that governments will choose to help this kind of tourism and invest in conservation, on the contrary; the professor affirms that it is not necessarily true. She argues that there are several real problems involved, like illegal hunting and corruption.
She says that even though it is true that new jobs are created in hotels and tourism companies, and also, that this helps a little bit the locals, the truth is that they usually get a very low pay. She points out that this new job opportunities attract people from the outside and this generates a lot of changes in the local community, they start using telephones, Internet and losing their cultural authenticity.
In conclusion, the professor thinks that the author's statements about eco-tourism are partially true, but that it is far from being a perfect development.
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Fiction or non-fiction books? TOEFL PRACTICE, writing section.
Even though non-fiction books bring learning experiences with real, useful facts about our world and humanity, I have to say that I definitely enjoy more the fiction books.
I have nothing against non-fiction books, furthermore, I enjoy them very much, but there are several reasons why I always look for fantasy in my readings: the most important reason is that I appreciate human creativity more than any other human skill. That's why, for me, a fictional book is a piece of art reflecting how unlimited is the imagination of the author. One of the best examples of this is my favorite writer; J. R. R. Tolkien, who created a whole world inhabited with lots of human-like species fighting in amazing epic wars. He didn't only create the stories; he also inspired with them the creation of movies and board games.
A second reason for me to prefer fictional books is that I look for variety in my routine when reading. Sometimes you just want to relax and forget about the issues of your daily work, which for me is easier to accomplish with fantasy than with biographies or historical books.
A final reason to mention is that most of my favorite fictional books belong to a series of books. So, when you finish reading your wonderful story you don't get the feeling of emptiness because the fun has ended; on the contrary, you can go for the next book in the series, maybe with the surprise that this could become your new favorite one.
All in all, reading is an amazing and healthy way of entertainment no matter what kind of books you like. But for me, books are like ships that help you to travel with imagination and I want to travel a lot farther than what we already can do in reality.
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Antarctica and fuels, TOEFL PRACTICE, integrated writting task #2
The author of the reading and the lecturer present opposed points of view with respect to the hypothetical possibility of extracting oil and gas from the Antarctica; while the passage states that it is a difficult but worthy solution for the growing population, the professor considers that nothing can be worthy enough to put under risk that beautiful environment; therefore, other possibilities must be considered.
According to the passage, economical and military activities are now prohibited and fishing and tourism are regulated by the consensus of 1991. The author considers the regulation a decision made by a small elite group, which should be reviewed given the future demands of the increasing population. On the other hand, the lecturer regards the treaty as a smart pact made by scientists and government representatives from all over the world, because for her this problem should be kept out of financial interests, as it would be the case for big multinational corporations.
In the reading it is pointed out that life is found only in limited regions of the Antarctica and that even thought it is a hazardous work to extract and transport gas and oil from the Antarctica, we are know extracting these fuels from other places we once thought were too risky to try it, like Alaska and the North Sea. However, the professor, who has been in Antarctica before, says that the conditions there are not comparable to those of Alaska, the conditions are very harsh and the shipping of the fuels would be done through inhabited places. For her, this beautiful but delicate place shouldn't be exposed to that danger, no matter what.
All in all, the author considers this a very profitable and prospering option, while the professor would never risk the environment of Antarctica and proposes to study alternative sources of energy instead, like Hydrogen.
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Love at first sight, TOEFL PRACTICE, WRITING SECTION #2
Personally, I think it is pretty naive to believe that there is something like love at first sight. I could be wrong, but talking from my experience, even after years of relationship, people discover that what they once thought was true love, was actually a very bad relationship.
I think we all grow up with a false ideal of love, which is implanted in our believes from movies and tv shows. Also, as some psychologists have told me, people look for different kinds of relationships at different stages of their life. Therefore, youngsters looking for beautiful partners could misunderstood a very strong attraction and desire and consider it “love at first sight”
If people after years of relationship sometimes realize that what they felt wasn't love, how can we expect that what you are supposed to feel at first sight is actually love? I had such an experience with my first boyfriend; I was so wrong about the concept of love that I couldn't see how unhappy were we. This led me to several months of arguing due to amazingly very stupid reasons and we refused to break up because we thought that we should fight for our love. Now I see, that love is about other things than what you could thought at the beginning; it is about compatibility of characters, respect, thrust and care based on the several experiences you have lived together. You can't trust or respect everybody without knowing him! In the same way, you can't say you love someone with just the sensation of loving him at first sight.
Another good example of people thinking that they were in love when it wasn't true are my parents. Luckily for me, they misunderstood their feelings! But they could have not been more wrong about what they felt for each other. I have to say that even though I love them both so much, they are the most contrasting people I have ever known. While my mother always put their loved relatives as her first priority in her everyday life, my father is very egocentric and for small decisions, he always put himself above others. This created a lot of fights and sad moments in their relation. Anyway, for some people this difference in their personalities could be a compatible trait in some twisted way, but what is not, is the fact that my father is the less organized person of the human history, while my mother is a order freak. How could they possibly think of living together?
By definition, love is a feeling, but in reality it is also a matter of compatibility and experience.
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Bu içerik Topluluk Kurallarını ihlal ediyor.13 Ekim 2012
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TOEFL PRACTICE, WRITTING SECTION #1
Imagine that you can talk for one hour with any person who has lived at any time in history. Which person would you choose to meet? Use specific details and examples to explain your choice.
Answer:
At the present moment, the culture I am more interested in is the Chinese culture and the profession of the past that I like the most is that of a warrior. Therefore, if I had the chance to talk to someone who has lived at any time in the past, I would choose a Chinese warrior. I don't know exactly which period in the history of China I would pick up to select my warrior, but he must be from a very active period with wars, revolutions, invasions, etc so that his experiences result exciting and worthy to talk for hours.
My interest in warriors comes from my curiosity for war. Even though I am a very peaceful person and I consider that violence is the last method that should be used to achieve something, I love to watch and participate in martial art's fights. Therefore, I have two parts of my personality that seem to contradict each other, and maybe, talking to a real "honorable" warrior could help me to find out if the excitement I feel for simulated violence is very far from reality or if, on the contrary, I should reformulate my conception of war as a natural process in the evolution of the human race.
For the Chinese culture I feel admiration and curiosity. Even in the present, I think that I definitely should go to China sometime. My interest started while practicing Kung Fu, because my master was a direct descendant from the Shaolin monks and with his lessons I found that Kung Fu is not only a matter of physical exercise, but of respect, discipline and tradition. I have also found that some of the most qualified people in my career are from Asia and most of them regard their success to their discipline, which I think is poorly taught in my culture.
I wish I could really do it, I would learn a lot from him!
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30 min, 323 words
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Comments:
1) DAMN IT, the question says "imagine... talk for ONE hour" and I said something about talking for hours LOL.
2) Thank you in advance for your corrections! :)
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