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Day 4
Yesterday night I lost my sleep and suffered a nightmare about my boy friend. When I relaxed and lied on my bed for a long time, there were l lot of scripts like bullet flashing in my mind. What they showed were “He is not your Mr Right” , ”He is not suitable for you.” Someone who can predict others’ destiny had told me “My husband in the future is gentle and elder than me.” But now my boy friend is younger and easy to loss his temper when something happen out of his control. In my dream I told myself “You can’t tell these contents to your boy friend tomorrow. ” and “the great way to solidify your relationship is appraising him rather than abusing.
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Day 3
Do you like milky tea? In my opinion most of young people prefer milky tea rather than other drinks ,even some of them are used to drinking one cup of it everyday , although a growing number of researches announced it is bad for health. This evening I went a famous chain store to buy a cup of soda tea, but this brand was one of the best known of milky tea, and it is famous for their Chinese style milky tea which add more tea than other brands. So we can feel a little bit more tea taste when we drink it. Actually this brand is getting to become an important visiting card of Changsha. Why do I say this so? Because more and more tourists come to this city to drink it although they need to line a long queue, and drinking the milky tea of this brand already lists their travel plan. Someone in the next city will feel proud of drinking it if one of their friends can take one cup of it back for them, before drinking it they also take a photo and post on their social account. If you are likely to travel Changsha, it will be a great option to taste it.
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Day 2
In the morning I watched the “Intersterllar” which I has watched about 6 years ago in the theater. But at that time I can’t understand the story. I remembered that day I was so tired that I took a nap in the middle, and I was free today so I decided to watch it one more time. One of all the lines I could remembered clearly “Do not go gentle into that good night”, before this moment I thought the meaning of this sentence is so romantic to describe love or starry sky. By the movie I understood this line is vigorous to encourage people fight against the trouble from the life. In the end, the important roll, Cooper find the mystery of dimension of space. That’s true ,love is a thing which can’t be made by human and it is an only way to solve all the problem, nevertheless in the dark and lonely universe. In the afternoon I received 4 packages with soy milk which is full of protein, and I like it so much.
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Day 1
Today I did a lot of things I needed to do. At first I did yoga because I felt heavy tension in my legs for several days. So I thought I had to do something to loosen the stress of my legs. The day before yesterday , I ran for 20 minutes with my boy friend in our school campus, but it was useless to loosen them, then I decided to do some yoga. After yoga, I went to a mall far from my university to buy a pair of glasses. The last pair of my glasses already used for one and half years, but this was not the main point. I had doubt that the shortsightedness degree of my eyes increased a lot , because sometimes I see something ambiguous. But it’s lucky for me that the clerk told me my degree keeps very well. An a sad story happened, I wanted to buy a better pair of glasses but the price is higher than others. Opinions on glasses vary from me and my boy friend, he thought I just need a better glasses frame not glasses lens. I don’t know why, they way of glasses is seeing something more clearly. Another important way is making me look more beautiful, but the basic function is seeing something clearly. So I refuse his willing to pay for it for me , and finally I paid for it by myself. Then he is angry.
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Please help me correct🥺🥺
Opinions on how to get success vary from person to person. But I believe that no one can deny one the necessary factors – preparation, which due to rare success.
First of all, it is difficult for common people to succeed in a certain field, especially in the modern society characterized by intense competition. Someone who prepares earlier and harder than others is more likely to catch the opportunity to stand out from the crowds.
Moreover, how should we prepare to achieve our ambition? Personally I think the first step is doing the best today. As the saying goes “What do you seed, there what do you gain.” So it is something that we need to make efforts to check the schedules on daily basis.
Taking above what I said in to account, we can draw a conclusion easily: the best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today. It is high time to put down the concerns and study for ambition.
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Opinions on what abilities students should have vary from person to person. From my point of view, there are several main abilities such as creativity, responsibility, social skills and physical ability. But among them, the ability to meet challenges bravely is one of the most essential to cultivate for students, especially in modern society characterized by packed challenges and opportunities.
To begin with, in our social context, the success mixes many necessary factors and catching the wonderful opportunity is the vital one. As we all known, the opportunity is directly related to the challenge. If someone want to brace the chance, he or she has to suffer the risk with it. For example Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba , who chose to step into e-commercial field when the computer is expensive for common people. He succeed finally part because he catches the opportunity, technological era is coming, at the same time he suffer the numerous pressure.
Moreover, a growing number of young people suffer depression and suicide nowadays. Do you think deeply the reasons behind this phenomenon? Personally I think they lack the ability to meet the challenges bravely, the first choice for them is escaping from the pressure when they face the difficulty.
Taking account above factors into consideration, we can draw a conclusion. It is high time we cultivate student’s ability to meet challenges and it will benefits all aspects of their life.
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Opinions on what the true wealth is vary from person to person, especially in modern society characterized by materialism. Personally I think wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
First of all, with the intense competition of academic study and labor market nowadays, an increasing number of young people are under numerous strain. Thus, mental health is becoming a vital part for us, which is a guarantee of productivity and creativity.
In addition, recently a new psychological study published on magazine reveal the relationship between well-being and wealth in mind. If one is filled with stress whatever from anywhere and has no way to release the pressure, he or she will have trouble catching the beauty from life and feeling happy.
In our current social context, economic wealth is regarded as the primary sign of success. Certainly , as we all known the adequate economic wealth is a prerequisite for a carefree life, but we can’t deny that the mental health is directed related to our well-being. Furthermore, it is high time to focus on the wealth of the mind.
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Sentence practice
1、Nothing can grab attention of parents than their kid’s school performance. More and more companies forcing on extracurricular class to help students increase their scores have taken off , accompanied by the single social valuation system .The thought one is a loser if one isn’t able to enter a prestigious university and finds a high-pay job is taken root in this young generation.
2、In one sense, despite years of efforts to learn English, one can’t master this language without a immersion environment.
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sentence practice
accompany by
The increase seats of bachelor have been accompanied by the growing number of graduate choosing to go further in the study not work.
have implication for / particular attention should be paid to
I gradually understand that meeting a responsible and wisdom teacher is not just good for one’s study performances , but also has implication for one’s method of thinking about the world. For normal universities, particular attention should be paid to foster a vat range of real educators who are absorbed in boosting local education career in the coming future.
have an adverse effect
The young teachers who were in rural area were ban to teach in the towns or cities by local government this year , which had an adverse effect on the teacher-developing mechanism.
preoccupied with
I’ve been preoccupied with my future tuition already, and no energy to focus on anything else.
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theater is gone into university
I 've never been to the theater but usually cinema. Watching drama in theater was a leisure for upper class in the history because of higher cost of tickets. Movie comes as a boon for the poor, notably watching movies on the internet.But the experience of touching superstars who you like is different from real man standing at front of you. In the hope of spreading drama culture, the goverment pushed it through combing the university and the theater, they invited some actors to go into the university to act for students for free. It was also difficult for ordinary one to get a ticket to access the hall.
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