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Hello guys, this is my first news story . You are welcome to correct my mistakes !!!! Jessica hates moving frequently Many people complain that the rent price soares every year . People keep moving in and out. They have different reasons for moving , but the reasons mostly based on the rent prices are unaffordable, fed up with the landlord, too far from work and inconvenient shopping. However, not everyone is the same . Jessica is a resident in NYC for many years. She’s been paying rent. Her recent living place has been renting for 5 years and she doesn’t want to move . As a senior manicurist, she knows her incomes and her affordable rent price range. She said : “ The rent price soares every year , but the salary rises also .” Jessica expressed nothing to say about the rent . As long as her salary can afford the rent she would not move to a smaller house although with less rent . Jessica has moved frequently, too. She has rich moving experiences. She strongly agreed with a quote that the meaning probably is moving from up floor to down floor , losing a basket of grains. That’s why Jessica hates moving around. Jessica alleged herself as an expert of renting. She summarized some tips for renting a house below : •Find a house in appropriate place , such as closed by markets and train stations •The house has enough rooms •The AC , heater, electricity and hot water are working ordinary •The rent price should be affordable •The landlord is a rich and responsible person, and he lives closed by •Do not move frequently Rent price soaring is an unchangeable thing . Working hard and hanging in there or moving around are your choices . Jessica is grateful for having a stable job and living in a rented house.
2024年5月30日
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Everyone in life has the right to be educated and study at school. Learning a foreign language is included in this right too , and in our modernized world it is essential to know foreign language. However, many people see that this gets children away from their culture, while I see it is essential that children learn new language while they keep their culture. To begin with, learning new language, especially English, is essential and it opens the door for many opportunities in life, from studying to work and living abroad.Moreover, it help the individual to boost his self-esteem and it has many positive impacts on the activity of brain. Nevertheless, family and school have the ability to support children in learning and preserving their maternal language and culture. For instance, the parents may supervise their children and ensure that they are learning their language well by reading and listening to it, and schools may organise trips for children to attend cultural and folkloric events.
2024年5月29日
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Dear Italki tutors, Would be grateful if you could check my response to IELTS Writing Task 1 question (I struggled a bit with finding synonyms for the words "account for; represent", so I would also be thankful for your advice here) Here is the task (the pic is attached): The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words and my response: The pie charts illustrate demographic information about marital status in Canada and Australia. Overall, while in Canada there are more separated individuals, Australia can boast higher share of married individuals. Single, widowed, and divorced account for smaller proportions in both states. In Canada, separated but not divorced persons make up the lion’s share of the population (53%). Married individuals account for around a third, while the rest of the categories, such as never married, widowed, divorced and in a same sex marriage represent the rest of the population proportions, with the first two being just under 10% and the latter being under 5%. In Australia, married persons constitute the largest share of the population (46%). Meanwhile, separated individuals who did not end up their marriage account for just over 40%. Widowed, single and divorced populations represent the rest 13% of the population, each of them making up 6%, 5% and 2% respectively. Many thanks in advance and have a nice day!
2024年5月29日
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