Jan
You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late, and then you faced many problems. Write a letter to the owner of the company. In your letter, you should tell: – where you were going – what problems you faced – what action you would like the owner to take Dear Sir or Madam, As a frequent rail traveler, I feel that I have a fair understanding of the problems one might encounter when traveling by train. But I recently traveled on a train from Tianjin to Beijing which arrived very late. Then I faced many problems: there was no subway and bus, and taxi service was also busy because many people were stucked in the railway station. I had to stay in the station for the whole night. I read from your official website that if the train was over one hour late, compensation can be paid into our bank account. My card account number is xxxxxxx. Yours faithfully, X
2021年7月26日 10:46
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受邀老師
You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late, and then you faced many problems. Write a letter to the owner of the company. In your letter, you should tell: – where you were going – what problems you faced – what action you would like the owner to take Dear Sir or Madam, As a frequent rail traveler, I feel that I have a fair understanding of the problems one might encounter when traveling by train. But I recently traveled on a train from Tianjin to Beijing which arrived very late. Then I faced many problems: there was no subway and bus, and taxi service was also busy because many people were stucked in the railway station. I had to stay in the station for the whole night. I read from your official website that if the train was over one hour late, compensation can be paid into our bank account. My card account number is xxxxxxx. Yours faithfully, X
Hi! Though in class we could go into this in more detail, I see you have some issues here with the opening/introduction. There are also some content issues in terms of what would be appropriate to include in a letter vs. inappropriate. A quick look suggests this would score around a band 5-5.5. For more info on IELTS task 1, check out this video: https://youtu.be/OXAYBWRdiPI
2021年7月26日
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