Hi, I’m Julia and I live in Kazakhstan. (You can join two short sentences together) People like to eat a lot of meat in our country. (The place usually comes after the object in a sentence) I love to eat steak with veggies, and barbecue with French fries. (add "and" after your last comma) I know that is harmful, but I'll eat it twice a week. (The time usually comes after the object) The correct 6 part English sentence structure = Who, What, Where, When, How, Why (What = verb + object)

Hi, I’m Julia and I live in Kazakhstan. In our country people like to eat a lot of meat. I love to eat steak with veggies and barbecue with french fries. I know that it's harmful, but twice a week I'll eat it.

Hi, I’m Julia. I live in Kazakhstan. In our country people like to eat a lot of meat. I love to eat steak with veggies and barbecue with french fries. I know that is unhealthy,but twice a week, I eat it.

Hi,I’m Julia I live in Kazakhstan. In our country,people like to eat a lot of meat. I love to eat steak with veggies,barbecue with french fries. I know that it is harmful, but twice a week I eat it.

Hi,I’m Julia I live in Kazakhstan. In our country,people like to eat a lot of meat. I love to eat steak with veggies,barbecue with french fries. I know that is harmful,but twice time a week I eat it.