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Today I went to my favorite cafe in my hometown. It’s not my favorite cafe because of their coffee. In fact their coffee is not the best, not at all. It’s my favorite cafe because it reminds me of my study time, where I gathered lots of different memories. In addition, it’s an family owned Italian cafe and runs by an older Italian man who always speaks a mix of Italian and German. They are so authentic, kind and talkative which always sweetens up my day. It’s not one of these hipster cafes (which I by the way enjoy as well ), but more one of the classic ones.
2021年6月16日 13:59
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Today I went to my favorite cafe in my hometown. It’s not my favorite cafe because of their coffee. In fact, their coffee is not the best, not at all. It’s my favorite cafe because it reminds me of my study time, where I made many different memories. In addition, it’s a family owned Italian cafe and run by an older Italian man who always speaks a mix of Italian and German. They are so authentic, kind and talkative which always sweetens up my day. It’s not one of these hipster cafes (which I enjoy by the way as well), but more one of the more classic ones.
Your English here is good. Some of these are just more natural suggestions. For example, making memories sounds better to me than gathering memories. Keep it up!
2021年6月16日
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