Farhana Qureishi
Make these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough? 1) Ekhlas's books are widely read in both Bangladesh and West Bengal, appreciated not only for their content but also for their elegant style and delightful flavor, which can be found in abundance in "Looking Back", presented here in its English translation. 2) Ekhlas's books are widely read both in Bangladesh and West Bengal as much for their content as for their elegant style and delightful flavour, which one will find in large measure in "Looking Back", whose English translation is presented here.
2023年5月10日 16:31
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Make these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough? 1) Ekhlas's books are widely read in both Bangladesh and West Bengal, appreciated not only for their content but also for their elegant style and delightful flavor, which can be found in abundance in "Looking Back", presented here in its English translation. 2) Ekhlas's books are widely read both in Bangladesh and West Bengal as much for their content as for their elegant style and delightful flavour, which one will find in large measure in "Looking Back", whose English translation is presented here.
While your English is very good, it is too “wordy”. Try to simplify it.
2023年5月10日
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