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Can you tell me about any experimentos you have done before? The most interesting experiment I took part was when I had to check the temperature from a great Island volcano. It wasn’t an easy task because you have to take risk if you want to take a good measure.

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Can you tell me about any experimentos you have done before? The most interesting experiment I took part was when I had to check the temperature from a great Island volcano. It wasn’t an easy task because you have to take risk if you want to take a good measure.
Great write up. Few observations though , ‘experiments’ was spelt wrongly. -took part had an incomplete connection. -punctuation not bad . Overall , a good piece .

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