wendy
As the temperature drops down to minus 10 degress, many thing become hard to do. Especially in the freezing morning, it's not a good idea to goto work on foot with cold wind. The best choice is to walk to your car ,and get in it as quickly as possible. But there are some people who are not as happy as they were in summer morning. Because when they start their electric vehicles, the screen shows that they need to charge their cars. And they just charged their cars two days ago. This is very different from summer. In summer, they just need to charge their cars once a week for 350-400 kilometers on average. But this is the only disadvantage I can think out about electric vehicles. If you buy a very expensive electric car whose endurance can reach to 1000 kilometers, you are able to easily figure out the problem.
2023年12月18日 09:12
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As the temperature drops down to minus 10 degrees, many things become hard to do. Especially in the freezing morning, it's not a good idea to go to work on foot while the wind is cold. The best choice is to walk to your car and get in it as quickly as possible. But there are some people who are not as happy as they were in summer because when they start their electric vehicles in the morning, the screen/dashboard shows/tells them that they need to charge their cars and they just charged their cars two days ago. This is very different from summer. In summer, they just need to charge their cars once a week after driving 350-400 kilometers on average. But this is the only disadvantage I can think of about electric vehicles. If you buy a very expensive electric car whose endurance/autonomy can reach (up) to 1000 kilometers, you are able to easily figure out the problem.
2023年12月18日
As the temperature drops down to minus 10 degrees, many things become hard to do. Especially in the/ on a freezing morning, it's not a good idea to go to work on foot in the cold wind. The best choice is to walk to your car ,and get in it as quickly as possible. But there are some people who are not as happy as they were in the summer mornings. Because when they start their electric vehicles, the screen shows that they need to charge their cars. And they just charged their cars two days ago. This is very different from summer. In summer, they just need to charge their cars once a week for 350-400 kilometers on average. But this is the only disadvantage I can think of about/with/for electric vehicles. If you buy a very expensive electric car whose endurance/range limit can reach up to 1000 kilometers, you are able to easily sort out the problem.
All clearly understandable and well written. Minor errors with propostions. 'Figure out' is a good expression but with a different meaning. Figure out a problem - means to understand it, but in this case you already understand the problem what you need is a solution. Eg He couldn't figure out why his phone turned off everytime he opened instagram. or He couldn't figure out why his cat prefered to sleep on top of the fridge instead of in the nice cat basket he had bought for it. I especially like the use of correct specific vocabulary- minus 10 degrees, screen, charge, etc. The text feels natural and is easy to read.
2023年12月18日
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