Hello,every one. Today,I cut my hair at yesterday and Look forward to be told that you are so cool from friend but, just be said nothing. I feel a little bit sad.

Towa

2025年5月19日 03:23

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Hello, everyone. Today, I cut my hair and I was looking forward to being told that I am so cool from my friend but, they just said nothing. I feel a little bit sad.

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2025年5月19日 19:45

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