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Molly
I have bought so many oranges then I kept them in the fridge and forgot about them. This morning, my husband found out the oranges and they are still fresh. He made orange juice and made every one drink it. I am good at buying fruits but not good at consuming them.
2024年4月22日 01:27
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I bought many oranges, kept them in the fridge, and forgot about
them. This morning, my husband found them there still fresh.
He juiced them and served all of us. I am good at buying fruit, but less so at consuming it.
2024年4月22日
1
I have bought a lot of oranges and I kept them in the fridge, but I forgot about them. This morning, my husband found them and they were still fresh. He made orange juice and served it to everyone for breakfast. I am good at buying fruits but not at consuming them.
Well done.
2024年4月22日
1
I have bought a lot of oranges and kept them in the fridge but I forgot about them. This morning, my husband found them and they were still fresh. He made orange juice and served it to everyone for breakfast. I am good at buying fruits but not at consuming them.
2024年4月22日
1
I bough ta lot of oranges and I put them in the fridge and forgot about them. This morning, my husband found them and they are still fresh. He made orange juice and made every one drink some. I am good at buying fruits but not good at consuming them.
2024年4月22日
1
I have bought so many oranges then I kept them in the fridge and forgot about
them. This morning, my husband found out the oranges and they are still fresh.
He made orange juice and made every one drink it. I am good at buying fruits but
not good at consuming them.
Hi Molly,
Nice writing task!
Here are my corrections with explanations
I bought oranges (past simple as a fact) + then or
I had bought oranges (past perfect 1st action) then I kept (past simple 2nd action)
This morning my husband discovered (found is correct but he probably wasn't looking for them!)
He made everything a drink (article needed = 1 drink per person)
Keep up the good work!
2024年4月22日
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