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A Little Pincess. This is very nicely read, you nearly made me cry! You just need to stress 'SAIR er' for Sarah. Try to notice the difference between /I/ and /i:/ sounds. Hit v heat Rather lovely though, great stuff!

You're easy to understand. I'm a native English speaker. Let me know if you need any help. I can teach English as I'm an editor/proofreader. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, reading, writing, speaking. Very impressive. Good job. A little more work and you will be flawless. 🤝🏽😊