My friend and I were to have hanged out earlier today, but unfortunately, we had to quit it a day, because soon after we met she suddenly felt sick. It really worried me, and I felt that our day together finished before it had begun. Winter is a season when people easily catch catch a cold or flu, so my friend and I should take care of our own health, and keep warm in winter. There are many fun things waiting for us these months coming up, such as plenty of winter quizzes and outdoors activities for which we need to be ready. So staying healthy is really important. I hope my friend will recover quickly, and I’m already looking forward to having a chance of hanging out again. I certainly want to make plans for a proper “revenge day” so we can enjoy everything we have missed today.

LET ME HELP YOU IMPROVE YOUR PIECE A BIT. *I was supposed to hang out with my friend today*>> My friend and I were to have hanged out today, but unfortunately, we had to quit it a day, *earlier than planned* >> because soon after we met she suddenly *started feeling*>> felt sick. *She had eaten sushi before meeting me, and it seems like she got a mild case of food poisoning.* [***I'd rather remove this phrase because it doesn't have any development throughout the following text]. It really worried me, and I felt *bad* [*** this is an unnecessary word) that our day together *ended so suddenly* >> finished before it had begun. Winter is a season when people easily catch *colds or feel unwell*>> catch a cold or flu, so *I want both of us to*>> My friend and I should *be more careful about taking*.. take care of our health and keep warm in winter. There are many fun things waiting for us *in the coming* these months coming up such as *and we also have plenty of tests*>> plenty of winter quizzes and outdoors activities *that we need to prepare for* >> for which we need to be ready. So staying healthy is really important. I hope my friend *recovers*>> will recover quickly, and I’m already looking forward to *our next chance to hang*>> having a chance of hanging out again. I *definitely*>> certainly want to make plans for a proper “revenge day” so we can enjoy everything we have missed this time/ today