Daizy
On the weekend I keep myself relax. Doing yoga, enjoying food is my one of the most favourite schedule. Sometimes I prefer to watch movies, playing games on playground. It's like a kind of warm up routine but I followed it. Sometimes friends come in my house, we celebrate that weekend together. It's really nice day.
2023年9月20日 16:27
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On the weekend I keep myself relax. Doing yoga and enjoying food are my favorite plans. Sometimes I prefer to watch movies or playing games on the
playground. It's like a kind of warm up routine but I follow it. Sometimes
friends come over to my house and we celebrate that weekend together. It's a really nice
day.
2023年9月20日
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On the weekend I keep myself relaxed. Doing yoga and enjoying food are some of my favourite activities/ways to spend time. Sometimes I prefer to watch movies or play games at the playground. It's like a kind of warmup routine that I follow. Sometimes friends come to my house and we celebrate the weekend together. It's a really nice way to spend the day.
RELAX is a verb. RELAXED or RELAXING are adjectives. Yoga and Food are two things, not one. FAVOURITE is already superlative, so you don't need MOST. SCHEDULE is generally used for more 'official' times, for classes, work, trains, etc. If you're listing two things, you need to use AND, not just a comma.
2023年9月21日
1
On the weekend I keep myself relaxed. Doing yoga, and enjoying food is one of the
most favorite schedules. Sometimes I prefer to watch movies and play games on
the playground. It's like a kind of warm-up routine but I followed it. Sometimes
friends come to my house, we celebrate that weekend together. It's a nice
day.
2023年9月20日
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