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Marek Jedrysiak
Hi, It is question to native English speakers. This is description of my new product it will be on box of product, I am wondering if everything there is correct. Big thank you for any help.
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2023年10月7日 14:24
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You might not want to use the word "blackout." I would suggest using "darkness" instead so that people don't think your product will make them lose consciousness.
2023年10月7日
I agree with Jonathan re 'blackout'. I think 'protect' is better than 'maintain' for the makeup, but 'won't disturb/spoil makeup' is better I think.
Other than that, it sounds good to me.
2023年10月7日
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