Yesterday, I watched the movie "Maudie" and i must say it was pretty impressive. The main character drew me in from the moment I started watching. Her acting was superb and I really believed she had arthritis. The set production was also very good and extremely realistic. This was definitely one of those feel-good movies. I can give you free trial lessons if you'd like. Your writing is actually pretty good, you understand the basic concept.

Hi, I would rephrase the sentence “I was absorbed in her acting” in English this would not directly mean that you were fascinated by it. “I was fascinated by her (actings skills) for two hours. Her acting was great. I was convinced by it.” I hope you can understand why I chose fascinated and if not feel free to ask why. Otherwise your English is quite good! ❤️

Hi Mari! I can give you some good suggestions for making something sound more natural in English. Also for future articles or essays you may write. I am currently offering 3 trail lessons for free,to get some ratings and reviews for my new profile on the iTalki platform. There are only 3 available, so don't hesitate to send me a message, so we can choose a good time for you.

Hi Mari, I can help :)