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Hello guys, this is my first news story . You are welcome to correct my mistakes !!!! Jessica hates moving frequently Many people complain that the rent price soares every year . People keep moving in and out. They have different reasons for moving , but the reasons mostly based on the rent prices are unaffordable, fed up with the landlord, too far from work and inconvenient shopping. However, not everyone is the same . Jessica is a resident in NYC for many years. She’s been paying rent. Her recent living place has been renting for 5 years and she doesn’t want to move . As a senior manicurist, she knows her incomes and her affordable rent price range. She said : “ The rent price soares every year , but the salary rises also .” Jessica expressed nothing to say about the rent . As long as her salary can afford the rent she would not move to a smaller house although with less rent . Jessica has moved frequently, too. She has rich moving experiences. She strongly agreed with a quote that the meaning probably is moving from up floor to down floor , losing a basket of grains. That’s why Jessica hates moving around. Jessica alleged herself as an expert of renting. She summarized some tips for renting a house below : •Find a house in appropriate place , such as closed by markets and train stations •The house has enough rooms •The AC , heater, electricity and hot water are working ordinary •The rent price should be affordable •The landlord is a rich and responsible person, and he lives closed by •Do not move frequently Rent price soaring is an unchangeable thing . Working hard and hanging in there or moving around are your choices . Jessica is grateful for having a stable job and living in a rented house.
2024年5月30日 01:33
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Hello guys, this is my first story/essay/ . You are welcome to correct my mistakes !!!! Jessica hates moving frequently Many people complain that rent prices soar every year . People keep moving in and out. They have different reasons for moving , but the most common ones are related to the rent being unaffordable, being fed up with the landlord, and being too far from work and inconvenient shopping. However, not everyone is the same . Jessica has been a resident of NYC for many years. She’s been paying rent. She has been renting her current apartment for 5 years and doesn’t want to move. As a senior manicurist, she knows her income and her affordable rent price range. She said, “ The rent price soars every year, but my salary rises also.” Jessica had nothing to say about the rent . As long as she can afford the rent she would not move to a smaller house, even if the rent was less . Jessica has moved frequently, too. She has rich (odd word choice, without more explanation) moving experiences. She strongly agreed with a quote that the meaning probably is moving from up floor to down floor , losing a basket of grains.(sorry, can't understand the previous sentence) That’s why Jessica hates moving around. Jessica claims to be an expert on renting. She summarized some tips for renting a house below. Make sure: •The house is in an appropriate place , near/close to markets and train stations •The house has enough rooms •The AC , heater, electricity and hot water are working •The rent price is affordable •The landlord is a financially sound and responsible person, and he lives close by •Do not move frequently Soaring rent prices is an unchangeable thing . Working hard and hanging in there or moving around are your choices . Jessica is grateful for having a stable job and living in a rented house.
'News' usually refers to current events of interest to most of the population. This would not normally be considered news, unless it's 'news' for a specific group of people. You want the items in your list to match, in this case they are instructions to the reader. CLOSED is the opposite of OPEN. The word for NEAR is CLOSE TO. Good job!
2024年5月30日
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