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Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and walked on Sundays. My brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family played on the playground.
2023年9月11日 19:26
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Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and went for a walk on Sundays. My
brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family
played on the playground.
2023年9月11日
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Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and walked on Sundays. My
brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family
played on the playground.
Very good!
However,
Walked on Sundays - usually we would put a little more information for example 'walked on the beach', 'walked 3 miles'.
In the evening - which evening?
If you mean every evening you should say 'each evening'...
You play 'in' a playground.
2023年9月12日
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