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1. Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it. ------------------------------- Dear Xin, How is it going with you? Congratulations on your new home. I have looked over the pictures that you sent to me, it's a glimpse of beauty. I heard you have an extra bedroom now… So I bought Bed Sheets and bedding for you as a gift. Recently, I saw it, which I think is very suitable for your new bed. It is a 100% linen pink bedding. When I came across the website for this product, I thought of you. It will be delivered by SF Express tomorrow. Will you be at home at that time? If not, I will let the delivery man send it to my home, then I will bring it to your home. I am glad that you did not move far from me. What do you think about your new house? Sharing in your excitement over your new house and wishing you much happiness as you get settled in. Li
2021年5月18日 05:34
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1. Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it. ------------------------------- Dear Xin, How is it going with you? Congratulations on your new home. I have looked over the pictures that you sent to me, it seems very beautiful. I heard you have an extra bedroom now, so I have bought bed sheets and bedding (bed sheets are bedding, if you want to add other things say what they are) for you as a gift. I saw it recently and I think it will be very suitable for your new bed. It is 100% linen pink bedding. When I came across the website for this product, I thought of you. It will be delivered by SF Express tomorrow. Will you be at home at that time? If not, I will ask the delivery man to send it to my home, then I will bring it to your place. I am glad that you did not move far from me. What do you think about your new house? Sharing in your excitement over your new house and wishing you much happiness as you get settled in. Li
Well done, most of this is pretty good. The first two and last two sentences don't really relate to the question. Maybe use one sentence like this at the start and finish, but too much might mean you lose Task Response marks.
2021年5月18日
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