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In the cartoons above are two fathers who educate kids in distinctly different manner. In the left picture, a father is sitting in front of a television with a cigarette between his fingers and asks his son to pay geat attention to study.In the right picture, another father is immerced in his work and his son is olso studying
earnestly. The caption below the picture reads, "Being a Role Model is Better than Giving a Command."
This illustration is designed to warn those parents who merely make requests to children but indulge themselves in entertainment that their behaviors will do harm to the kids. Firstly, kids unconsciously imitate the behaviors they see everyday during which the negative habits gradually root in them, and these habits will exert a lasting influence in their future lives and induce numerous undesirable consequences. In addition, these parents are ruining their images in children 's mind for always failing to set a example as what they request on the kids, which may result in family conflicts.
I'm fully convinced that family education plays the most important role during kids ' growth. To cultivate positive habits and virtues, parents are supposed to set a good example and make strict demands on themselves.
2023年11月15日 16:27
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In the cartoons below are two fathers who educate kids in distinctly different
manner. In the left picture, a father sits in front of television with a
cigarette in his hand. He asks his son to pay great attention to his study.
In the right picture, a father is immerced in his work and his son is also
studying hard. The caption below the picture reads, "Being a Role Model is
Better than Giving a Command." This illustration is designed to advise ( educate)
parents who ask children to work hard, while indulging in entertainment. that their behaviors will do harm to the kids.
Firstly, kids subconsciously copy the behaviour they see in daily life and are therefore likely to embrace negative habits. These habits could exert a lasting influence
in their adulthood or be the cause of numerous undesirable consequences. In addition,
such parents ruin their own image in children 's mind for always failing to
set an example as what they request the kids, which may result in family
conflicts. I'm fully convinced that family education plays the most important
role during kids ' growing up ( upbringing). To cultivate positive habits and virtues, parents should always lead by example and be an inspirational role model to their kids.
Hi there, great job! We all have different writing styles. I got a bit lost here……. In addition,
such parents ruin their own image in children 's mind for always failing to
set an example as what they request the kids, which may result in family
conflicts…….., wasn’t quite sure what you were trying to express.
So the rest is just little tweaks from me….well done
2023年11月15日
In the cartoons above are two fathers who are educating their kids in distinctly different
ways. In the left picture, a father is sitting in front of a television with a
cigarette between his fingers and is asking/telling his son to pay great attention to study. In
the right picture, another father is immersed in his work while his son is
studying earnestly. The caption below the picture reads, "Being a Role Model is
Better than Giving a Command." This illustration is designed to warn those
parents who order their children to study while indulging themselves in
entertainment that their behaviour will do harm to their kids. Firstly, kids
unconsciously imitate the behaviour they see everyday and these negative
habits will gradually take root in them and will exert a lasting influence
in their future lives and result in numerous undesirable consequences. In addition,
these parents are ruining their images in their children’s minds by always failing to
set an example of what they request from their kids, which may result in family
conflicts. I'm fully convinced that family education plays the most important
role during kids' growth. To cultivate positive habits and virtues, parents are
supposed to set a good example and make strict demands on themselves.
Good, although you concentrate on the negative rather than the positive.
2023年11月15日
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