Farhana Qureishi
Are these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough? ▪ What a time to be alive! This news channel along with the organizer of this show, from the beginning, are hell-bent on promoting such degeneracy. It's high time we tackled that before it got mainstreamed.
2023年11月16日 15:01
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"What a time to be alive," usually is a very happy comment. It does not seem correct with the other sentences. Instead you could say, 'We are amazed at this!" or 'This is extremally unusual!" or "These are shocking things to be seeing! This sounds better to me, This news channel along with the organizers of this show have been hell-bent on promoting degenerate material. It's high-time we tackle it before it becomes mainstreamed. Hell-bent and tackle are very informal words considering the type of writing. If you are speaking to friends, then this is acceptable. If these are sentences that will be in a public document, then they are too casual. More formal; This news channel along with the organizers of this show promote immoral subject matter. They have done so since the formation of the show. We must stop this before it goes any further.
2023年11月16日
Hello Farhana, Before I share my opinion, I will clarify that I think the previous observations and suggestions from other helpers are great. And you should consider them, of course. In my opinion, however, your sentences are perfect IF you intended to play with language. What I mean is, that there is a play with words which I think is interesting. BUT more context is necessary to know if this was your intention. And that is a slightly different topic. I am simply responding to your original question. In short, yes. Your sentences should be considered grammatically correct and natural.
2023年11月17日
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