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My family is not very big.
The most it was be seen on my sister's wedding.
From our side it was just three people- my parents and I.
My Dad is from Egypt so we don't have the posibilitty to mantain close relation and get together whit his family.
My mom lost parents and brother.
My dad is very empathic and intelligent, he loves sweets and watching TV series.
My mom is wonderful listener, she alway can supports me in difficult time in my life.
My sister is like my mom, they are very similar, I can talk with her about everything, and always get some good advice.
2023年11月3日 14:03
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My family is not very big. The most it was be seen at my sister's wedding. From
our side it was just three people- my parents and I. My Dad is from Egypt so we
can't maintain a close relationship and get together with his
family. My mom lost her parents and brother. My dad is very empathic and
intelligent, he loves sweets and watching TV series. My mom is a wonderful
listener, she always can support me in difficult times in my life. My sister is
like my mom, they are very similar, I can talk with her about everything, and
always get some good advice.
2023年11月4日
My family is not very big.
The most it was be seen on my sister's wedding. (I'm not sure what this means, but will guess). The largest family gathering we have had was at my sister's wedding.
From our side it was just three people: my parents and me.
My Dad is from Egypt so we can't mantain close relationships and get together with his side of the family.
My mom lost her parents and her brother.
My dad is very empathic and intelligent. He loves sweets and watching TV series.
My mom is a wonderful listener. She can always support me in difficult times in my life.
My sister is like my mom. They are very similar. I can talk with her about everything, and always get some good advice.
Use "I" for subject; "ME" for ojbect. If two clauses can be separate sentences, don't just join them with a comma. Make the separate sentences. If you want them to be one sentence, try linking with a conjunction. Example: "I love my dog, he likes to cuddle" is not good. Either make them two different sentences, or link with something like, "I love my dog becaus he likes to cuddle." Nice job!
2023年11月4日
My family is not very big.
The largest I've seen it was on my sister's wedding day. / The largest I've seen it was at my sister's wedding.
From our side, it was just three people--my parents and I.
My Dad is from Egypt so we cannot to maintain a close relation and get together with his family. My Dad is from Egypt so it is not possible to maintain a close relation and get together with his family.
My mom lost parents and brother.
My dad is very empathetic and intelligent. He loves eating sweets and watching TV series.
My mom is wonderful listener, she can always support me through difficult times in my life.
My sister is like my mom, they are very similar. I can talk with her about anything and always get some good advice.
Make sure you do not add -s to the verb after "can", "cannot", "do" or any helper verbs. In spoken language it would also be really common to hear "my parents and me", though what you wrote is better in writing. Nice job!
2023年11月3日
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