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Saddam Hussain
No, not at all, technological advances always have two aspects one is positive and the other one is negative, but in most cases the positive aspect is more prominent. Sometimes the bad effects of a technological advance is very clear but we are still doing that, due to our greediness.
2023年3月12日 09:38
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受邀老師
No, not at all. Technological advances always have two aspects to consider - one is positive
and the other is negative. In most cases, the positive aspect is more
prominent. Sometimes the negative effects are obvious - but we ignore them due to greed.
2023年3月12日
No, not at all. Technological advances always have a downside, but in most cases the positive aspect is more
prominent. Sometimes these side effects are very harmful, but still, we decide to consciously ignore them, because we are addicted to technology.
I've changed a lot. I'm sorry. I understand everything and it's fine, except for 'greedness.' That work doesn't make sense. I'm not sure about 'prominent' either. I think that 'attractive' would work better. But, any way, I want you to see that you used lots of words. It's not a bad writing but it could be better.
2023年3月12日
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