Hello, this is my first question :)
Does this coffee description sound natural/correct?
A subtle coffee blend of the finest Arabica beans from Brazil, Colombia, and Ethiopia that brings to the cup a beverage of extraordinary sweetness, with fine floral and citrus acidity and warm notes of milk chocolate, hazelnuts, and toasted bread.

thanks!

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Hello, this is my first question :)
Does this coffee description sound natural/correct?
A subtle coffee blend of the finest Arabica beans from Brazil, Colombia, and Ethiopia that brings to the cup a beverage of extraordinary sweetness, with fine floral and citrus acidity and warm notes of milk chocolate, hazelnuts, and toasted bread.

thanks!

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I'm confused by "floral acidity". Throw in an extra noun to go with floral - something like "floral hints and citrus acidity". Actually, I don't like "acidity". "Acidity" is not a pleasant taste. Perhaps just "floral and citrus hints".

instead of "the cup", say "your cup"

"hazelnut" instead of "hazelnuts"

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It sounds great, Daniela, but I think I would prefer "...produces..." instead of "...brings to the cup...".

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Yes Daniela,
This description is very creative and correct.
Best regards, 
Maria

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