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It’s overcast today. Before my vocal class, my father issued me a math challenge: to solve fifty basic math problems in a row. If I made a mistake on any problem, I would have to do ten more. This rule led to me facing hundreds of questions. As I progressed, I lost my focus, and my mistakes increased. It's madness; my homework is stacking up. Once concentration is lost, errors come easily.
2024年8月28日 12:24
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It’s overcast today. Before my vocal class, my father issued me a math challenge: to solve fifty basic math problems in a row. If I made a mistake on any problem, I would have to do ten more. This rule led to me facing hundreds of questions. As I progressed, I lost my focus, and my mistakes increased (my mistakes started to pile up). It's madness; my homework is stacking up. Once concentration is lost, errors come easily (errors start to creep in).
Great work! In brackets are suggestions you can consider. But what you wrote is perfectly fine.
2024年8月30日
It’s overcast today. Before my vocal class, my father issued me a math challenge: to solve fifty basic math problems in a row. If I made a mistake on any problem, I would have to do ten more. This rule led to me facing hundreds of questions. As I progressed, I lost my focus, and my mistakes increased. It's madness; my homework is stacking up. Once concentration is lost, errors come easily.
Oh dear. Your dad is a hard taskmaster!
2024年8月31日
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