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Imagine yourself in 2041 - what will the world be like and what will you be doing?   In my imagination, in 20 years, people will no longer depend too much on technology even though technology is constantly developing. All modern equipment is considered to be a tool that gives good advice for humans to lead a healthy lifestyle.  In terms of transportation, instead of using too many vehicles like driverless cars, driverless public transportations, people will take a walk and exercise more like many years ago. Social networks are the most popular means of communication nowadays. However, in the near future, they will be used less and less as people gradually return to handwritten letters to express more love and affection. Also, online meetings will be held only in case people will not be able to meet in person.  Instead, everyone will prefer to take a long-distance trip to meet each other as the revolution of transportation will provide humans with just-within-minute travels. For the environment, humans will try to re-green the whole earth, especially, the absolute protection of rare animals.  20 years later, I will be a mature, successful 36-year-old woman. At that time, I will be financially independent and spend more time with myself and with my family. Besides, I will also lead a healthy lifestyle by exercising regularly, smiling more, and eating more healthy foods. I surround myself with friends and share with them meaningful stories about life, family, and happiness. At the same time, I will be an active woman, who strives hard every day to do good things for society by helping people under difficult circumstances around the world, especially children to gain access to education, food, and healthcare. I, a mature woman at that moment, always appreciates what I have and feels happy every single moment of my life.  Can you help me to improve my essay??
2021年10月6日 06:44
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In my imagination, in 20 years, people will no longer depend too much on technology even though technology is constantly developing. All modern equipment will be considered a tool to give good advice for humans to lead healthy lifestyles. In terms of transportation, instead of using too many vehicles like driverless cars and driverless public transport, people will take walks and exercise more, like they did many years ago. Social networks are the most popular means of communication nowadays. However, in the near future, they will be used less and less as people gradually return to handwritten letters to express more love and affection. Also, online meetings will be held only if people will not be able to meet in person. Instead, everyone will take long-distance trips to meet each other, as the revolution of transportation will provide humans with just-within-minute travels. For the environment, humans will try to re-green the whole earth, also enhancing their protection of rare animals. 20 years later, I will be a mature, successful 36-year-old woman. At that time, I will be financially independent and spend more time with myself and with my family. In addition, I will also lead a healthy lifestyle by exercising regularly, smiling more, and eating more healthy foods. I will surround myself with friends and share with them meaningful stories about life, family, and happiness. At the same time, I will be an active woman, who strives hard every day to do good things for society, including by helping people in difficult circumstances around the world, especially children, gain access to education, food, and healthcare. I, a mature woman in the future, will always appreciate what I have and will feel happy every single moment of my life.
This is such a lovely essay! 😊
2021年10月6日
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