Miriama
I usually go to sleep between 10pm to 11pm. Before I’ll get to the bed I do personal hygiene- taking a shower and brushing my teeth and cleaning my face. If I don’t feel tired I will have a cup of night tea to better sleep. Sometimes I have an issue with falling asleep and that’s why I have been trying to improve my sleeping habits last month. I have stopped to use mobile devices before my bedtime and added new activities as calming yoga exercises or book reading instead.
2021年1月30日 10:47
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I usually go to sleep between 10pm and 11pm. Before I go to bed I do
personal hygiene- taking a shower, brushing my teeth and cleaning my face. If
I don’t feel tired I will have a cup of tea to sleep better. Sometimes I
have an issue with falling asleep and that’s why I have been trying to improve
my sleeping habits for last month. I have stopped using mobile devices before
bedtime and added new activities such as calming yoga exercises or book reading.
2021年1月30日
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I usually go to sleep between 10pm to 11pm. Before I’ll go to bed, I take a shower, brush my teeth and clean my face (grammatically it's ok to say you clean your face however, we would wash your face when you took a shower.) If
I don’t feel tired, I will have a cup of night tea to help me fall asleep. Since I have had a hard time falling asleep this last month, I have been trying to improve my sleeping habits. Before going to bed, I have stopped using mobile devices and am trying new activities such as calming yoga exercises or reading instead.
Good job! I understood what you were trying to say. Keep up the good work!!
2021年1月30日
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I usually go to sleep between 10pm to 11pm. Before I’ll get to the bed I do
personal hygiene- taking a shower and brushing my teeth and cleaning my face. If
I don’t feel tired I will have a cup of night tea to better sleep. Sometimes I
have an issue with falling asleep and that’s why I have been trying to improve
my sleeping habits last month. I have stopped to use mobile devices before my
bedtime and added new activities as calming yoga exercises or book reading
instead.
Sorry ...we would assume you would wash your face when you took a shower.
2021年1月30日
I usually go to sleep between 10pm and 11pm. Before I get to bed I take a shower, brush my teeth and clean my face. If
I don’t feel tired, I have a cup of tea so I can sleep better. Sometimes, I
have an issue with falling asleep and that’s why I have been trying to improve
my sleeping habits in the last month. I have stopped using mobile devices before my
bedtime and instead, I’ve started doing yoga and reading books.
I was awake from 10 pm to( till) 11 pm.
I was awake between 10 and 11 pm.
Go to bed- suggests to go sleep, get to bed means physically getting into the bed.
If I don’t feel tired, I’ll get a cup of tea- it is correct if you want to talk about a likely event referring to present or future.
However, here you are talking about your routine, general truth from your life. So 1 conditional would not be correct. You need zero conditional. It is present simple.
Sleeping habits- you used present perfect continuous, which is fine, but then you cannot say ‘last month’. Unless you change the sentence to past simple, or replace last month to ‘in the last month’ ( which shows last month is still on)
2021年1月30日
I usually go to sleep between 10pm to 11pm. Before I’ll get to the bed I do
personal hygiene- taking a shower and brushing my teeth and cleaning my face. If
I don’t feel tired I will have a cup of night tea to better sleep. Sometimes I
have an issue with falling asleep and that’s why I have been trying to improve
my sleeping habits last month. I have stopped to use mobile devices before my
bedtime and added new activities as calming English speaking practice?
2021年1月31日
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