1. First, school gives us homework and we feel tired.
2. Then, we have tests and we feel scared.
3. Next, we study a lot and sometimes feel sad.
4. Finally, after exams we feel happy.

Please correct my writing

Question

1.	First, school gives us homework and we feel tired.
	2.	Then, we have tests and we feel scared.
	3.	Next, we study a lot and sometimes feel sad.
	4.	Finally, after exams we feel happy.

Please correct my writing

Answer

Hello, I interpreted this passage to mean that the first part of the sentence CAUSES the second part. So, I would say:

1. First, our school gives us homework, which makes us feel tired.
2. Then, we have tests, which make us feel scared.
3. Next, we study a lot, which sometimes makes us feel sad.
4. Finally, we feel happy after exams.

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