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Have you ever used Tinder? Tinder was launched by Sean Rad in West Hollywood in 2012. Over 11 years with impressive achievements, Tinder is the world’s most popular dating app, making it the place to meet new people. Recently, Tinder have been available for 56 languages and used on iOS as well as Android. In Tinder, users “swipe right” to like or “ swipe left” to dislike other users’ profiles, which include their photos, a short bio, and a list of their interests. When both users like each other, they can exchange messages. I’ve used this app since last month to connect and making new friends. I will swipe left with the profiles that show offensive images or money, cars, other properties. Besides that, I also don’t swipe right to the users want to look for FWB, ONS or sugar baby. I like the simple and polite profile pictures which include clear information and don’t brag any property because most of them are serious people that I can trust.
2023年4月6日 01:51
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Tinder was launched by Sean Rad in West Hollywood in 2012. Over the past 10 years, Tinder has achieved impressive success and is currently the world's most popular dating app, making it the ideal platform to meet new people. Tinder is now available in 56 languages and can be used on both iOS and Android. In Tinder, users swipe right to like or swipe left to dislike other users' profiles, which consist of their photos, a short bio, and a list of their interests. When both users like each other, they can exchange messages.
Great job overall! There were a few minor errors in your text that I corrected for you. One thing to note is that Tinder has only been around for 10 years, not 11. Additionally, it's important to remember that the app's primary function is for dating, not making friends. Lastly, be careful with your grammar and word choice, as this can impact the clarity of your message. Keep up the good work!
2023年4月7日
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Have you ever used Tinder? Tinder was launched by Sean Rad in West Hollywood in 2012. Over 11 years with impressive achievements, Tinder is the world’s most popular dating app, making it the best place to meet new people. Recently, Tinder have become available in 56 languages and is available on iOS as well as on Android. On Tinder, users “swipe right” to like or “swipe left” to dislike other users’ profiles, which include their photos, a short bio, and their list of interests. When both users like each other, they can exchange messages. I’ve used this app since last month to connect and making new friends. I will swipe left when seeing profiles that show offensive images such as money, cars or other properties. Besides that, I also don’t swipe right when I see users who want to look for FWB, ONS or sugar babies. I like the simple and polite users with a nice profile picture which profile include clear information and don’t show off their property because most of them are serious people that I can trust.
2023年4月6日
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