Why someone is so arrogant and contemptuous . Even others do him or her a favor but he or she take it for granted and make a sour face once things don’t go well as they wanted.
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Why is someone so arrogant and contemptuous? Even when other people do them a favor, they take it for granted and pull a sour face when things don’t go the way they want.
Level: B2/C1.
Your meaning is very clear, and you use some strong vocabulary, especially "arrogant", "contemptuous", and "take it for granted". The main difficulties were with question structure, subject-verb agreement, and natural expressions. The revised version sounds much more natural while keeping your original meaning. 😊
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Why are some people so arrogant and contemptuous? Even when others do them a favor, they take it for granted and make a sour face when things don’t go as well as they wanted.
Well done! I've made the pronoun ('they') consistent. 'He or she' does of course make sense too, but you had a mixture, and 'they' is simpler (also more natural in speech).
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