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Miya
Today the weather is sunny day, but i stay at dormitory all days. why i can't go out,because i am lazy😁 .all days i was ordered food online. At night i was study english three hours .when i finshed my study i aredy haven a bath not water😭,this is my weekend. PLease correct me.

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Today it is sunny, but i am staying at dormitory all days. why i can't go out? because i am lazy😁 .all these days i was ordering food online. At night i was studying english for three hours .when i finished my study, I couldn’t have a bath as there was not water😭 This is my weekend. PLease correct me.
I am not native myself, but as far as I know these are some mistakes I could notice. And hey, don’t waste sunny days! it is much better to enjoy them being out ! 😉
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Today the weather is sunny day, but i stay at dormitory all days. why i can't go out,because i am lazy😁 .all days i was ordered food online. At night i was study english three hours .when i finshed my study i aredy haven a bath not water😭,this is my weekend. PLease correct me.
Ok if You want to correct You can You help me to tell me Your telegram
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Today the weather is sunny but i stayed at dormitory the whole day. I can't go out,because i am lazy😁 . i ordered food online for the whole day. At night i studied english for three hours .when i finshed my study i already haven't taken a bath 😭this was my weekend. PLease correct me.
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