Bharti Kataria
If I have spare of money at the end of month , I'll definitely buy a bony skeleton. If I had more money then, I whould like to go for shopping :)
2020年12月24日 10:58
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If I have spare of money at the end of month , I'll definitely buy a bony skeleton. If I had more money then, I whould like to go for shopping :)
I don't know how to correct "a bony skeleton" (that's a VERY strange thing to say) but the grammar and spelling is very good. Just change to: "at the end of the month I'll definitely buy a bony skeleton." If I had more money then I would have liked to go shopping. (That is if you're talking in the past.)
2020年12月24日
If I have spare of money at the end of month , I'll definitely buy a bony skeleton. If I had more money then, I whould like to go for shopping :)
First sentence grammar structure is okay. Second second sentence spelling mistake and it will be would have
2020年12月24日
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