Molly
Today, I had bún riêu (Vietnamese crab noodle soup) for breakfast. I hadn't had it for months so it was really delicious.
2023年9月17日 07:43
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Today, I had bún riêu (Vietnamese crab noodle soup) for breakfast. I hadn't had it for months so I found it really delicious.
2023年9月17日
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Today I had bún riêu (Vietnamese crab noodle soup) for breakfast. That I hadn't had it for months made it all the more delicious.
The comma after "today" is not needed. I changed the second sentence to create a link between not having it for months and its being delicious.
2023年9月18日
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