Анастасия Лобко
I really like chocolate, but one of my favorite is Cinnabon. It’s really delicious and sweet.
Do you like it?
2021年1月28日 14:03
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I really like chocolate but one of my favorite desserts is a Cinnabon. It’s really
delicious and sweet. Do you like it?
I removed the comma because you have the word "but" so a comma isn't necessary. I also added the word "desserts" since Cinnabon is not a type if chocolate. You want to specify that you enjoy the Cinnabon dessert.
2021年1月28日
It's amazing!
2021年1月28日
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