Hola Gerardo!
#3. You said: âI missed a deadline and lost an opportunity that I donât think itâs going to happen again.â
It should either be:
1. âI missed a deadline and lost an opportunity that I donât think is going to happen again.â
Or:
2. âI missed a deadline and lost an opportunity that I donât think will happen again.â
#7. You said: âI enjoyed the morning sessions of the course, but the afternoons were a bit dull.â
I would remove âof the course.â
So, it would be:
âI enjoyed the morning sessions, but the afternoon ones were a bit dull.â
Alternatively, you could say âlessonsâ or âclasses.â
Example 1: âI enjoyed the morning lessons, but the afternoon ones were a bit dull.â
Example 2: âI enjoyed the morning classes, but the afternoon ones were a bit dull.â
#8. âI enjoyed the morning subjects, but the afternoon ones were boring.â
You used âsubjectsâ here, but âlessonsâ might sound a bit more natural in this context also.
So, you could say:
âI enjoyed the morning lessons, but the afternoon ones were boring.â
#9. You said: âThe weekday subjects were engaging, but the ones on Saturday were pretty boring.â
You said âsubjectsâ again, which could be swapped with either âclassesâ or âlessonsâ which sounds more natural:
âThe weekday classes were engaging, but the ones on Saturday were pretty boring.â
I think your other sentences sound fineâgood job Gerardo!