Irene
In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other places are Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums, restaurants where you can eat typical Spanish meals, the city centre and what ever you want do do.
2022年6月7日 21:32
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In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other beautiful places are Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums, restaurants where you can eat typical Spanish meals. There is also the city centre where you can do lots of things.
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2022年6月9日
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In my country, Spain, there are a lot of beautiful places you can visit. In my
opinion, the most beautiful is "La Alhambra" in Granada. Other places are
Salamanca, Santiago de Compostela, Sevilla, Córdoba and Madrid, of course. Here in Madrid, there are a lot of museums and restaurants where you can eat typical
Spanish meals. There is also the city centre where you can do whatever you want do do.
First paragraph is perfect. Last sentence is better when you split it.
2022年6月8日
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