Valeriia
My average day is day when I work. I wake up at 8 a.m o clock. I try to wake up early but now I can wake up only at 8 a.m o clock. It is early for me. After that I give food for my kitten . Next I drink a glass of breath water and do my morning routines. I brush my teeth and clean my skin. After that I can do massage for my face and exercises for my body. After that I will eat my breakfast. I must begin work at 9.00 a.m. At 12.00 p.m I have a lunch. I work to 6 p.m. after finishing working I can go to the gym for stretching. After that I will go home and go to the bad .
2024年8月4日 16:44
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My average day is a workday. I wake up at 8 a.m.. I try to wake up
early, but right now, the earliest I can wake up is at 8 a.m., which is early for me. After
I wake up, I feed my kitten, and then I drink a glass of water and do my
morning routine: I brush my teeth, clean my skin, massage my face, and do some exercises. After that, I eat my
breakfast. I begin work at 9.00 a.m.. At 12 p.m. I have lunch. I work until
6 p.m.. After finishing work, I usually go to the gym to do stretches. After that, I
go home and go to bed.
Put either "a.m. or p.m." or "o'clock" after the number for the time (either 8 a.m. or 8 o'clock), but not both. Some other small grammar mistakes aside, what you wrote was easy to read and understand!
2024年8月4日
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My average day is a work day. I wake up at 8 a.m . I try to wake up early but now I wake up only at 8 a.m . It is early for me. After that I feed my kitten . Next I drink a glass of water and do my morning routines. I brush my teeth and wash. After that I massage my face and exercise Then I eat my breakfast. I must begin work at 9.00 a.m. At 12.00 p.m I have lunch. I work to 6 p.m. After finishing work I go to the gym to stretch After that I go home and go to bed .
2024年8月5日
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